Home » Poems » Hugo Sarvida Jr. » Separation

Separation

Separation is Such a sad goodbye; same as Returning a ring.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Diane Christian

Date: 6/24/2024 9:17:00 AM

So true Its sad A very good write We were heartbroken when our mother left home. It would of been their 25 th anniversay On the next one. We dont blame mam Some one prayed on her tried to be the nighf in shining armour he was invited as a guest in our home my sisters pen friend And ended up leaving with our mam

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 6/25/2024 1:24:00 AM

Oh, I'm sorry for a heart that's broken. Many have that stories, Diane. Maybe, your Mom has a reason to believe. She has her viewpoint about love and life. Sometimes, one may sacrifice the feeling of guilt in exchange for happiness. Well, let's just let fate have its course to find its way. In the case of your Mom, I may call this, a chance maybe, that she found her soulmate. I may sound a little bit discriminate to you. That's what just I sense. She's matured and knows her decision well. To find your soulmate in the midst of adversary is like a felon in the eyes to many. Well, the hurt is already been done. We just have to accept reality. We wonder, it might happen to you, to me, or anyone who will have this experience. It's an unexplainable feeling to whom it may due. Anyway, thank you for your comment and thank you for opening up your rightful indignation. Keep yourself a forgiving heart...Sincerely, Hugo.