Separated Hearts

Loving you is Like a River flowing into a Lake of perfection,
Cascading into the shimmering light

Loving you is like a Tsunami through the sahara,
Surviving the scorching heat and burning sight

Some days I miss you, the better half of me;
The half of my heart left with a hole until its other piece is complete

Walking around like theres a fog in my head
 till the skies open up clearing a path for the Sun 

I'm on my way
Loving you is what I do each and every day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:10 PM
Congrats Dina on a terrific third place win with this dynamic delightful poetry luv..enjoy ..
Johnson Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 10:30 PM
Very nice. congratulations Dina. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Congrats on your win, Dina. Nice going. xxxRalph
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Dina. Love, Carol
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