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Ever long we stare to the East The waters dance with glee. Alluring at the very least This symphony may be. We watch those who know this beauty And those who seek Her cheer, We watch those who know such bounty Yet nigh do these folk fear That this dance be a siren call A cruel temptress awaits. Such cacophony nigh to stall Virgin people from cold fate For though Her waters can caress Enveloped in her folds, Some foolish bathers are remiss In the power that She holds. Hark! To arms! Victims call, 'Distress!' This sound we dread to hear, "Go now! Repulse death's harsh egress," As there is ceaseless fear That there will be tragic failure An agile step misplaced, That the Ocean will call once more, With smothering embrace. And so we navigate her waves The pounding force beware, The mouth of the Devil himself Comes here-forth to ensnare. "Onward, dauntless brothers!" we hear, "Against the waves we go, For there is one who was swallowed Fight for his life so!" Into the mounting fray we dive, Against the rising swell. Now such ranks form to hunt for him And pull from water'd hell. Mercilessly, cruel time crawls forth As lungs begin to burn, Our hope wilts as it comes to pass The point of no return. Yet nigh will we ever desist, We will reclaim this man. Duty burns as Sun o'erhead To bear him back to land. Near the shore a whistle blasts thrice, Do I dare to believe? The call of a search successful, A body they start to heave. Hold for his life dearest brothers Though the water crash down! It is in obstinate resolve That you earned your renown. Hold steadfast, continue the watch Arrogant creatures we, To think our meager lives our own, They belong to the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/10/2014 4:33:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Christian - I choose your first very well written poem - I like i a lot - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2014 6:04:00 PM
This is such a deep powerful piece and an excellent write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 9/9/2014 1:27:00 PM
http://www.nbcwashington.com/news/local/17-Year-Old-Boy-Pulled-From-Water-in-Ocean-City-Maryland-263074781.html This is the drowning this poem refers to.
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Date: 9/9/2014 11:12:00 AM
Christian, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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