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Sentimentality
*Image of Apples by Morning Chores.
Sentimentality
O' sentimental I,
the judge of my
confidences, toils
to no end,
embroiled in fickle
negotiations that
constants my door,
mercilessly,
slants and opacity
advents the path
of mirage victims,
relic a past,
a remiss garden
of ripened apples fall,
bittersweet looms
unnoticeably,
like so many apples
that fell, festers ...
a gardener tastes his
lost Eden.
2022 May 23
*2nd Place*
Sentimentality
~~Julia Ward: Judged 2022 June 05
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