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Sent Feelings

I throw my words free.. hope they land and find your eyes.. feelings leftover.. never spoil only missed.. must be used before there lost..

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Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/19/2010 5:17:00 AM

Beautiful when the veil is removed and our words can be expressed freely... Hit home for me in many ways Michael...Love your work! Lay

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/18/2010 7:39:00 AM

Having just read your other poem about failing to return words of love, I'm glad to know you express your emotions more freely now, Michael. "Must be used before they're lost" says sooo much! A beautiful tanka. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/17/2010 6:55:00 PM

Well happy are we that we read your wonderful words, Michael :) and how wonderful that you make use of them so well :) lucky words indeed-- replying to soupmail -- nikko :)

Dana Smith

Date: 12/17/2010 3:32:00 PM

Enjoyed this one.... Enjoyed all of your poetry this evening... Dana'lynn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:18:00 AM

received your feelings , thanks, Michael

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/17/2010 6:26:00 AM

Very touching and sweet,my friend.Beautifully written.

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 9:18:00 PM

Another beauty with a message, it would be sad not to hold on to them hey? L O H, enjoyed your gem, love Wilma

Deb Wilson

Date: 12/16/2010 8:56:00 PM

this has a sad ring to it but is quite beautiful at the same time..good one Michael my poet friend!take care~Deb

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/16/2010 5:56:00 PM

Hello Michael, This is so beautiful, sad but your words are haunting dear friend As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2010 4:26:00 PM

Another beautiful expressive Tanka Michael.. this form allows great expression .. very romantic tones and overtones sensed in this piece... enjoyed this entertaining write with luv..my W.K. form your freezing J.G. in the snow..luv.

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 12/16/2010 3:27:00 PM

must be held to be felt and understood....jay