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Sent Feelings

I throw my words free..

hope they land and find your eyes..

    feelings leftover..

never spoil only missed..

must be used before there lost..

forgivenesstanka

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Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

December 19, 2010 at 5:17 AM

Beautiful when the veil is removed and our words can be expressed freely... Hit home for me in many ways Michael...Love your work! Lay

Carolyn Devonshire

December 18, 2010 at 7:39 AM

Having just read your other poem about failing to return words of love, I'm glad to know you express your emotions more freely now, Michael. "Must be used before they're lost" says sooo much! A beautiful tanka. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 17, 2010 at 6:55 PM

Well happy are we that we read your wonderful words, Michael :) and how wonderful that you make use of them so well :) lucky words indeed-- replying to soupmail -- nikko :)

Dana Smith

December 17, 2010 at 3:32 PM

Enjoyed this one.... Enjoyed all of your poetry this evening... Dana'lynn

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 17, 2010 at 8:18 AM

received your feelings , thanks, Michael

Fabiyas M V

December 17, 2010 at 6:26 AM

Very touching and sweet,my friend.Beautifully written.

Wilma Neels

December 16, 2010 at 9:18 PM

Another beauty with a message, it would be sad not to hold on to them hey? L O H, enjoyed your gem, love Wilma

Deb Wilson

December 16, 2010 at 8:56 PM

this has a sad ring to it but is quite beautiful at the same time..good one Michael my poet friend!take care~Deb

Sharon Ruebel

December 16, 2010 at 5:56 PM

Hello Michael, This is so beautiful, sad but your words are haunting dear friend As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 16, 2010 at 4:26 PM

Another beautiful expressive Tanka Michael.. this form allows great expression .. very romantic tones and overtones sensed in this piece... enjoyed this entertaining write with luv..my W.K. form your freezing J.G. in the snow..luv.