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To honeymoon where we'd dreamt From thoughts when we were young This place we're mystically sent It's where our dreams begun Being marital would fuse our fun Honeymooned, uncommon rise To wails through reddening clouds Left us in worthy surprise Amidst thoughts thinking loud It's then we'd seen the crowds Like a mist they soon descended Abhor, Neanderthal Confusion abounds we're intended To be their eventual thrall Is this the luring of us all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 24, 2013 at 12:18 AM
Congratulations James. Very provocative and unique. I enjoyed. Love, Joyce
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December 23, 2013 at 8:12 AM
Hello, James, Congratulations, sending Christmas cheers. .. love Linda <3
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December 23, 2013 at 6:19 AM
hi James enjoyed congrats on win season's greetings Shadow x smile hug
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December 23, 2013 at 6:04 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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December 21, 2013 at 7:32 AM
congrats on your fourth place win in my contest James, it was unique and I loved it
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November 27, 2013 at 5:57 AM
Your write here dear poet is definitely mystical ! As usual, intriguing this soul, with pleasure ! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving with you and yours my friend, and a wonderful day today....Much love, james
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November 19, 2013 at 11:23 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..That would be an interesting honeymoon with the Neanderthals..Sara
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November 17, 2013 at 4:26 AM
It's very mystical write, James
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November 16, 2013 at 8:46 PM
it is very nice to see you James, are you saying the dream Honeymoon, did not happen... I hope you are alright, and your dream place gets better... Thank you for sharing a poem, on how one can be lured in by false beauty.. Sorry to see it was not mystical... xox~ LINDA
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