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Sensual Sway

Drawn to her bosom, he is enchanted always. Sexual magic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/15/2011 2:57:00 PM
remember senryu has no punctuation for it is meant to be phrases not sentences, your concept fits excellently into this form just write ..drawn to her bosom/enchanted as always/sexual magic..don't worry over the syllable count as long as it's under 17 ;) Light & Love
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Renee Kelly
Date: 7/15/2011 3:32:00 PM
Thank you for the tips, Debbie!
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