Sensual Sway

Drawn to her bosom,
he is enchanted always.
Sexual magic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 2:57 PM
remember senryu has no punctuation for it is meant to be phrases not sentences, your concept fits excellently into this form just write ..drawn to her bosom/enchanted as always/sexual magic..don't worry over the syllable count as long as it's under 17 ;) Light & Love
Kelly Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Thank you for the tips, Debbie!
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