Notes About The Poem

- Sensual and Juicy -

My first thoughts today were of you

                                Delicious and soft ... my sweetie

                               when your golden drops splashing

                                  I will touch you with my mind

                                   your sweetness and virginity

                                   ___ such a fragrant moment

                                a belle harmony when I wake up

                                     I love you for love's sake


                                     My knees became weak

                                   I could not wait any longer

                                Lips unused, ready for a wet kiss

                                    ___ must dress you naked

                                        taste your juicy fruit

                                      The natural and unique

                                   Inch by inch, be not ashamed

                                  Fresh orange juice is my favorite








                                             
                                               02/02/2021

                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Edmonds  Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 1:00 PM
A splendid sensual write and very juicy Anne-Lise. My first drink of the day is a glass of orange juice, from now on that drink will remind me of you and this fruity poem :-) Belle
Proxenos Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 3:23 AM
Wow my dear friend, so sensual, sexy, evocative and inviting - well penned and a definite winner - orange as displayed, a perfect choice! Love and hugs soul sis. Take care. Jenny
Krutsinger Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 9:39 PM
My orange and I are going to be taking a very cold shower now if you will please excuse us.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Wow! Juicy indeed!
Goff Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Mesmerizing, your talent shines!
Babcock Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Now I will never think of orange juice in the same way. lol Love the poem. love phyl
Jayasankar Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Lovely... cleverly written Anne. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs ~ Ani
Ball Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Well said, I love orange juice too. With the pulp in it. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 1:48 AM
- Judy, thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 9:05 AM
It is the first time that I fall in love...with an orange dearest, Anne-Lise, probably you should write commercials as well! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 1:48 AM
- Everything starts with a first time :) - Demetrios, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 6:09 AM
Sensual photo-- amazing picture enhances your splendid theme, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 1:46 AM
- Vijay, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Oh my, deliciously juicy good ^_^
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 1:46 AM
- Akkina, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 11:23 PM
Great poem Anne Lise. In Malta we grow a lot of sweet oranges. ~~
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 2:36 AM
- Victor, thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Taste your juicy fruit...ooh lala
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 2:36 AM
- Thank you for your lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 2:50 PM
sweet, juicy and delightfully sensual, i like you fruity theme Anne-lIse:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 2:35 AM
- Thank you for your lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Ah, I think you have unleashed the sensual girl inside of you. I see a winner here Sunshine, thank you for sharing and gl xo
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 2:35 AM
- Vie Rose, thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Well written Ann-Lise! Enjoy :)
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 2:34 AM
- Thank you for your lovely comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Love your take on the contest theme Anne, nothing like a glass of fresh orange juice to start the day. Good luck Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 2:34 AM
- Tom, thank you for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, oh I now know your favourite fruit. Mine is blueberries. Hugs Darlene
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:58 PM
- Just ate one ... juicy and good :) - I like blueberries too :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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