Sensitive

Why do I feel the tears wet my inside lids?
It’s not the pain but then again it might be.
The tender mind’s so easily stabbed with pins.
In motion, can’t be undone by cup of tea.

Lingers at my side, devotedly. I hurt
for my shin, calf, ankle, thigh I can’t exert.
It’s psychological as well as throbbing.
It’s not anyone’s fault, I feel like sobbing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:35 AM
With me, it depends on what I put in my tea: two lumps or whiskey, either way, I can't have it to disrupt my day, Aloha, William.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:36 AM
I have a glass of wine at night which helps either with the pain or at least to take my mind off it for a bit. Taking a steroid pack so bringing the pain down from 9 to 2. Bless you, dear friend!
Rolland Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 4:12 PM
so touching and sensitive, sometimes we miss clues, thanks poet
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 4:00 AM
Thank you, dear Yann!
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 7:18 AM
- Scary to think that stress, anxiety and depression can contribute to increased pain sensitivity and even create pain without a physical cause, Kim :) - It's tiring and uncomfortable - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 4:02 AM
And the other way around. That is crazy to me but it happens. Finally got in to see the doc. Pain being managed and hopeful. Hugs.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:39 PM
sending hugs and blessings....sorry you're in such discomfort.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:32 PM
Rereading this. I think with tests it will get figured out. So sorry you are hurting
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Hind Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:18 PM
Big Hugs!! I always welcome your work, but hate to see you in pain, dear poetess. You can depend on my presence for your poetry, of which I never tire. TLC, prayers, - beautiful write
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:20 AM
Thank you, Paige! You are always sweet.
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 9:27 AM
One I can really relate to unfortunately , Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 3:47 PM
I am so sorry…wrapping you in a hug xx
DiMino Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Good people under attack. Devil never sleeps. Hang in their my friend. Christ is you shield.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 3:46 PM
I do appreciate that, my friend! Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 3:23 AM
This body of ours can be sensitive. I know for I had many operations in my life. However, I'm strong.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:11 AM
So glad you’re strong, my friend! Good to hear from you!
Thomas Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:54 PM
This is lovely, as always, but I wonder what it would look like if it weren't constricted by rhyme, meter or form? It feels like there's a lot here but it's hiding behind your craft and excellent handle of language. This is well done, but I'd love to know the story behind it all. Can you add details to help a reader connect a little more? Also, this is just one person's opinion, and she loves your work overall, I just want a little more?
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:11 AM
Thanks, Jayme! I appreciate all that you said. Yes, this one is meant to be a little covert. Sometimes, we just need to say something but not put out the whole situation. You are really wise to see that there is more. Hugs.
Thomas Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:57 PM
I also honor that we're not always willing/able to add more context based on the topic. I don't mean to pressure. Only to appreciate and tell you that your work leaves me wanting more of it. I hope that came through.
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