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Labelled once as relaxation station a brothel I was... that offered my hospitality expertise catering to human nature lusts meeting carnal cravings satiating fleshly appetites… ...yet… the stigma of being a home-wrecker along accusation and the reality of being an illegal den of promiscuity made me guilty, seeing aborted babies while enriching my operators… ...thus… grateful am I for laws striving to close my establishment persevering to end my pleasurable pursuits (lurking through prostitution leisure I'm ashamed of) toward prioritizing peace in the family midst home and community welfare as God has wondrously designed in His goodness*.
Psalm 33:5 He loveth righteousness and judgment: the earth is full of the goodness of the LORD. February 20, 2021 2nd place, "Personification Poem 150" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger; judged on 6/25/2021.

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Date: 6/30/2021 3:47:00 PM
many congrats on your win Beata:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2021 8:52:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win in Caren's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:21:00 PM
You did very well in this write, Beata. Good luck in the contest, Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:13:00 PM
Beata, All children of God at the start. Yes, close the door, and open our hearts. -Richard
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Date: 2/20/2021 6:13:00 AM
- Closed doors ... does not mean that the business will end ... it will never end, Beata - Today they can be "bought" online too - Great written for the contest, good luck :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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