Senses

Sunlight and shadows White clouds drifting by An old apple tree Birds of a feather Scavenging windfalls. Barefeet on grass Cool leather seat Glass table top Sunshade retreat. Urban noise Church clock chimes Lunch Bell rings. Hot spiced Garlick Wings. 12/ 5 / 2024.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2024 3:55:00 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. Tasty ending to your descriptive scene. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

George Seal
Date: 12/17/2024 5:10:00 AM

Thank you Sara, the pleasure was all mine, I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge. It was a format I had not seen before, a very nice change. Please accept my kindest regards. George.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/16/2024 8:49:00 PM

'urban noise' lovely. Congratulations dear poet. Cheers!

George Seal
Date: 12/17/2024 5:02:00 AM

Hi thriving, thank you for commenting so kindly on my poem. In the past year, a new bypass has been opened, freeing the ring road in the rush hour, At bedtime the new road makes a rather pleasant soothing sound. As I live midway between the two roads, it works for me. My kindest regards to you, George. .

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/16/2024 2:15:00 PM

Nice! Congrats, George! Those wings sound scrumptious!

George Seal
Date: 12/17/2024 5:19:00 AM

Hello Kim, thank you for you kind comment, and congrats on my effort. Wings, perfect for an Autumnal lunch. My kindest regards to you. George.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2024 9:30:00 AM

- Great written with sound and lovely picture, George ... congratulations :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

George Seal
Date: 12/16/2024 10:40:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for your kind comments. They are very much appreciated. My regards to you, and a very Merry Christmas, and also A Happy New Year, for the forthcoming festive season. George.