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Senses

I can see when my eyes are open I can feel when I reach out and touch I can hear when my ears are willing but my heart can only heal so much

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2021 4:35:00 PM
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rereading this gem. Did it ever get entered in a contest? I just like it so much.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/4/2021 12:27:00 PM
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I reread this write and think your fourth line would refer to being hurt badly and although you can maybe forgive, your heart cannot forget - the problem is that our heart is connected to our brain. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Sand Blown
Date: 12/19/2020 1:04:00 PM
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...hmmm....ascent says....scent-a cent as a...sent-ascent...as sent...a cent ascent... make sense!?.....so little can change us so much.....some things are pre-caused ....life's a fractal : ) ..stan sand
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/4/2020 8:36:00 AM
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Very powerful and profound! Amazing poem!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 11/19/2020 9:42:00 PM
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A lovely touching poem... Thank You.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2020 10:40:00 AM
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Excellent poem. I understand the ending of this :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2020 7:11:00 PM
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again, a short poem with such wonderful poignancy. Gotta fave this one.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2020 4:29:00 AM
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Good one at least you are looking with open eyes not like the blind who think they are not blind. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/10/2020 2:10:00 AM
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The 'punch' of that final line is excellent, and gives the reader reason to ponder upon, Richard. Regards // paul
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/9/2020 12:05:00 PM
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Bravo Richard, so true - kudo's - an absolute fave for me. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/8/2020 8:46:00 PM
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I sense a change coming. A fine poem, so well expressed. Best of wishes, Evelyn :)
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Sand Blown
Date: 11/8/2020 3:05:00 PM
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...nice write.....doing what sense-says ......stan sand
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