Senses

• Deep

rereading this gem. Did it ever get entered in a contest? I just like it so much.

I reread this write and think your fourth line would refer to being hurt badly and although you can maybe forgive, your heart cannot forget - the problem is that our heart is connected to our brain. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

...hmmm....ascent says....scent-a cent as a...sent-ascent...as sent...a cent ascent... make sense!?.....so little can change us so much.....some things are pre-caused ....life's a fractal : ) ..stan sand

Very powerful and profound! Amazing poem!

A lovely touching poem... Thank You.

Excellent poem. I understand the ending of this :)

again, a short poem with such wonderful poignancy. Gotta fave this one.

Good one at least you are looking with open eyes not like the blind who think they are not blind. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

The 'punch' of that final line is excellent, and gives the reader reason to ponder upon, Richard. Regards // paul

Bravo Richard, so true - kudo's - an absolute fave for me. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.

I sense a change coming. A fine poem, so well expressed. Best of wishes, Evelyn :)

...nice write.....doing what sense-says ......stan sand