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Sense of Who You Are

Sense Of Who You Are l know a place where l am me its peaceful there and l am free but lm not fooled as other's try to rescue me and ask me 'why'. They think that place l say lm free is just a prison, they say they see l tell you now ,as they work it out its matter's not with all their doubt. The prize is sense, of who you are and not what other's think afar the peace of heart, that hard won fight a treasure found, l grasp it tight. l know a place where you are free it's peaceful there, so be as me and let them see who you really are the prison's theirs, as they look afar.

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Date: 11/10/2023 8:17:00 AM
very meaningful poem, I can tell this one comes from the heart. We all have a place that is our home away from home, I hope you can exist in yours often :)
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Jackie Elston
Date: 11/11/2023 2:37:00 AM
Thank you Matthew for kind comments. Finding peace in this mad mad world is a prize to treasure, l treasure the peace i'v found, but it took years. J.

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