Kelly Deschler Poet Quatrain

Sense of Spring

Feel the light
Feel the air
Begin to sense 
Something there

Like a difference 
Like a new thing
Sense the change
We call Spring

Smooth, glare ice
Now a muddy mush
All soon to be
Green and lush

A newborn feeling
An evolving hue
Pale yellow rays 
Touch sky blue

Dabs of purple
With tulip pink
Lift our eyes and
The way we think

Today is the day
That shall bring
Clearly a change
We call Spring

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Lindsay Laurie September 5, 2020 at 5:26 PM Hello Kelly ... we're just coming into your poetic spring now. Blossom and sun have put the isolation gloom in a corner - thank you for your positive verse Kelly - Lindsay Kelly Deschler September 14, 2023 at 6:24 PM Hello Lindsay... I'm glad to hear that the weather has been so nice where you are. We are seeing the first signs of autumn here in Wisconsin, but it is my favorite season :)

Cecilia Macfarlane March 15, 2020 at 3:29 PM Nothing as uplifting as spring after a long winter. Beautiful write Kelly. Hugs Kelly Deschler June 1, 2021 at 10:58 AM Yes indeed... Thank you for your kind comments on this poem Cecilia... I appreciate them very much... and please forgive my late reply, but I haven't been on Poetry Soup as much these days...

Timothy Mcguire March 12, 2020 at 6:47 PM Great poem, great words and great rhythm, I enjoyed it... :) Kelly Deschler April 23, 2021 at 4:56 PM Thank you Timothy... and please forgive my late reply... I haven't been spending a lot of my time on Poetry Soup these days :)

Jan Allison March 11, 2020 at 3:55 PM what a charming spring time poem Kelly , I do find spring colours so uplifting after the dull drab days of winter, its so lovely to see you on soup today:-) hugs Jan xx Kelly Deschler April 23, 2021 at 4:43 PM Thank you Jan... and please forgive my late reply... I haven't been on Poetry Soup as much these days :)