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Sense of Spring

Feel the light Feel the air Begin to sense Something there Like a difference Like a new thing Sense the change We call Spring Smooth, glare ice Now a muddy mush All soon to be Green and lush A newborn feeling An evolving hue Pale yellow rays Touch sky blue Dabs of purple With tulip pink Lift our eyes and The way we think Today is the day That shall bring Clearly a change We call Spring

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Date: 9/5/2020 5:26:00 PM
Hello Kelly ... we're just coming into your poetic spring now. Blossom and sun have put the isolation gloom in a corner - thank you for your positive verse Kelly - Lindsay
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/14/2023 6:24:00 PM
Hello Lindsay... I'm glad to hear that the weather has been so nice where you are. We are seeing the first signs of autumn here in Wisconsin, but it is my favorite season :)
Date: 3/15/2020 3:29:00 PM
Nothing as uplifting as spring after a long winter. Beautiful write Kelly. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/1/2021 10:58:00 AM
Yes indeed... Thank you for your kind comments on this poem Cecilia... I appreciate them very much... and please forgive my late reply, but I haven't been on Poetry Soup as much these days...
Date: 3/12/2020 6:47:00 PM
Great poem, great words and great rhythm, I enjoyed it... :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/23/2021 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Timothy... and please forgive my late reply... I haven't been spending a lot of my time on Poetry Soup these days :)
Date: 3/11/2020 3:55:00 PM
what a charming spring time poem Kelly , I do find spring colours so uplifting after the dull drab days of winter, its so lovely to see you on soup today:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/23/2021 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Jan... and please forgive my late reply... I haven't been on Poetry Soup as much these days :)

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