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Contest One lovely Summer Triolet visual 2
Sponsor Andrea Dietrich

Rich marmalade clouds, sunset fades, rooks dip and dive on thermals high; wings flutter as the flock cascades. Rich marmalade clouds, sunset fades with golden hues of many shades, dark shadows fly across the sky. Rich marmalade clouds, sunset fades, rooks dip and dive on thermals high. Triolet Poetry Contest 160 Words or Less ' Contest Info (47 words) Contest sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 05~28~15

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2016 11:39:00 PM

nice win.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2016 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/1/2016 10:38:00 AM

I love your word choices, congrats and Happy New Year.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2016 11:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 10:16:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2016 10:18:00 AM

Many thanks Skat I was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/1/2016 10:06:00 AM

Your poem is as pretty as the picture Jan ..Congrats on your win...best wishes for 2016

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2016 10:09:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) I was delighted to place so highly in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/13/2015 9:02:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 8:07:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 6/13/2015 8:15:00 PM

This is truely beautiful Jan...big congrats to you!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 8:07:00 AM

Thanks David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:29:00 PM

JAN, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 6:33:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2015 3:06:00 PM

Congratulations Jan!!! I have been trying for the past 3hrs to log in, but no Captcha showed up; I could not even contact Soup Admin. Finally success!!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 4:02:00 PM

Yes there have been issues Paul thankfully all resolved now:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/13/2015 9:12:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/13/2015 2:07:00 AM

Congrats on your wonderful win, dear Jan!! I loved this!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 4:47:00 AM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 1:00:00 AM

Utterly gorgeous imagery, Jan. If only it were totally iambic meter!! I would have placed it higher. Love it though! Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 4:47:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I did try hard for you:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/13/2015 12:52:00 AM

Jan, Congrats on all your wins recently:) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2015 4:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2015 4:52:00 PM

I have read some very beautiful ones by you, and making people laugh, well thats a serious business, and not always easy to do, poetry is for the reader, and yours always shines bright, no matter the style!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/31/2015 5:03:00 PM

aww thanks my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2015 4:17:00 PM

very very very beautiful!!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/31/2015 4:23:00 PM

Just to prove I do have a serious side to my pen Arthur - just hope Andrea likes it - I worked very hard to get this one right:-) hugs jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/31/2015 3:10:00 PM

Beautiful pen Jan! I really enjoyed this summer triolet .A very colorful canvas beautifully painted dear friend.Fantastic imagery!A 7! G.L. in the contest!Thank you for visiting my page Jan.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you! Hugs!:) D.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/31/2015 3:18:00 PM

Thanks so much Dorian i worked really hard to get this written - I just hope Andrea likes it:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2015 6:43:00 PM

The first three words are wonderful, as are their following scripting the image. Apart Marmalade the product, a little history of me is that I've actually partied with the 'Marmalade' of 'Oo Bla Dee' fame, amongst others :-) and my Captcha is AWB, the Average White Band, how appropriate, hugs, James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 7:15:00 PM

oh wow I loved that song it has such a happy feel to it in fact I can hear it in my head now - Average white band - gosh oh the memories! hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/29/2015 5:38:00 PM

A lovely visual brought to life by a delightful choice of words. I like it...hope the judge will, too:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 5:41:00 PM

I worked really hard to pen this Paul, I am so pleased with the way it turned out I just hope Andrea likes it :-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/29/2015 4:45:00 PM

really beautifully painted jan wishing you a lovely weekend pal

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 4:50:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Liam I worked really hard to get this one written I do hope Andrea likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2015 10:28:00 AM

A lovely Triolet Jan.. love your marmalade clouds ...hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thanks Joseph I worked really hard on this one - I hope Andrea approves:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/29/2015 7:41:00 AM

Oh wow! This is really good! Both you and Nette did the same visuals and I'm simply awed! I did one too, but it's my first triolet. Hugs! GL for the contest, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 7:47:00 AM

I am not really au fait with this form so got it critiqued and was delighted only the punctuation needed tweaking - just hope Andrea likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/28/2015 10:49:00 PM

Hello Jan... your poem paints a calming picture and truly matches the photo - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandip Goswami

Date: 5/28/2015 10:32:00 PM

You have created a portrait which is more artistic that the photo. Excellent. Best wishes dear JAN...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandip:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/28/2015 5:13:00 PM

this is very lovely, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thanks Ilene:-) Hugs Jan xx

Deb Wilson

Date: 5/28/2015 1:01:00 PM

What an awesome poem you have written here Jan !It is so lovely and best of luck in Andie's contest.Hugs, Deb

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2015 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Debs I tried really hard to get this right:-) I hope Andrea likes it:-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/28/2015 11:38:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan. Every line....Loved the marmalade clouds...the rooks dipping and diving.....beautiful imagery. I too wish I could see it all. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2015 11:40:00 AM

I worked really hard to get this one written Eileen and I'm really pleased with the way it turned out - thanks for the lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xx