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Contest One lovely Summer Triolet visual 2
Sponsor Andrea Dietrich

Sensational Summer Sky

Rich marmalade clouds, sunset fades, 
rooks dip and dive on thermals high; 
wings flutter as the flock cascades. 
Rich marmalade clouds, sunset fades 
with golden hues of many shades, 
dark shadows fly across the sky. 
Rich marmalade clouds, sunset fades, 
rooks dip and dive on thermals high. 

Triolet Poetry Contest 160 Words or Less ' Contest Info
(47 words)

Contest sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

05~28~15

skysummertriolet

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Poet Destroyer A

January 8, 2016 at 11:39 PM

nice win.

Jan Allison

January 9, 2016 at 8:50 AM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

January 1, 2016 at 10:38 AM

I love your word choices, congrats and Happy New Year.

Jan Allison

January 1, 2016 at 11:21 AM

Thanks so much Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

January 1, 2016 at 10:16 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT

Jan Allison

January 1, 2016 at 10:18 AM

Many thanks Skat I was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

January 1, 2016 at 10:06 AM

Your poem is as pretty as the picture Jan ..Congrats on your win...best wishes for 2016

Jan Allison

January 1, 2016 at 10:09 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) I was delighted to place so highly in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

June 13, 2015 at 9:02 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

June 14, 2015 at 8:07 AM

Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

June 13, 2015 at 8:15 PM

This is truely beautiful Jan...big congrats to you!

Jan Allison

June 14, 2015 at 8:07 AM

Thanks David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

June 13, 2015 at 6:29 PM

JAN, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison

June 13, 2015 at 6:33 PM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

June 13, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Congratulations Jan!!! I have been trying for the past 3hrs to log in, but no Captcha showed up; I could not even contact Soup Admin. Finally success!!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

June 13, 2015 at 4:02 PM

Yes there have been issues Paul thankfully all resolved now:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

June 13, 2015 at 9:12 AM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison

June 13, 2015 at 9:22 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

June 13, 2015 at 2:07 AM

Congrats on your wonderful win, dear Jan!! I loved this!! :D :D

Jan Allison

June 13, 2015 at 4:47 AM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 13, 2015 at 1:00 AM

Utterly gorgeous imagery, Jan. If only it were totally iambic meter!! I would have placed it higher. Love it though! Congratulations.

Jan Allison

June 13, 2015 at 4:47 AM

Thanks Andrea I did try hard for you:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

June 13, 2015 at 12:52 AM

Jan, Congrats on all your wins recently:) Alexis

Jan Allison

June 13, 2015 at 4:46 AM

Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

May 31, 2015 at 4:52 PM

I have read some very beautiful ones by you, and making people laugh, well thats a serious business, and not always easy to do, poetry is for the reader, and yours always shines bright, no matter the style!

Jan Allison

May 31, 2015 at 5:03 PM

aww thanks my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

May 31, 2015 at 4:17 PM

very very very beautiful!!!!!!

Jan Allison

May 31, 2015 at 4:23 PM

Just to prove I do have a serious side to my pen Arthur - just hope Andrea likes it - I worked very hard to get this one right:-) hugs jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

May 31, 2015 at 3:10 PM

Beautiful pen Jan! I really enjoyed this summer triolet .A very colorful canvas beautifully painted dear friend.Fantastic imagery!A 7! G.L. in the contest!Thank you for visiting my page Jan.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you! Hugs!:) D.

Jan Allison

May 31, 2015 at 3:18 PM

Thanks so much Dorian i worked really hard to get this written - I just hope Andrea likes it:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

May 29, 2015 at 6:43 PM

The first three words are wonderful, as are their following scripting the image. Apart Marmalade the product, a little history of me is that I've actually partied with the 'Marmalade' of 'Oo Bla Dee' fame, amongst others :-) and my Captcha is AWB, the Average White Band, how appropriate, hugs, James xxx

Jan Allison

May 29, 2015 at 7:15 PM

oh wow I loved that song it has such a happy feel to it in fact I can hear it in my head now - Average white band - gosh oh the memories! hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

May 29, 2015 at 5:38 PM

A lovely visual brought to life by a delightful choice of words. I like it...hope the judge will, too:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

May 29, 2015 at 5:41 PM

I worked really hard to pen this Paul, I am so pleased with the way it turned out I just hope Andrea likes it :-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

May 29, 2015 at 4:45 PM

really beautifully painted jan wishing you a lovely weekend pal

Jan Allison

May 29, 2015 at 4:50 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Liam I worked really hard to get this one written I do hope Andrea likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

May 29, 2015 at 10:28 AM

A lovely Triolet Jan.. love your marmalade clouds ...hugs

Jan Allison

May 29, 2015 at 10:34 AM

Thanks Joseph I worked really hard on this one - I hope Andrea approves:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

May 29, 2015 at 7:41 AM

Oh wow! This is really good! Both you and Nette did the same visuals and I'm simply awed! I did one too, but it's my first triolet. Hugs! GL for the contest, Jan!

Jan Allison

May 29, 2015 at 7:47 AM

I am not really au fait with this form so got it critiqued and was delighted only the punctuation needed tweaking - just hope Andrea likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx