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Sensational Spring

A beautiful pastoral scene, trees adorned in emerald green Lambs bounce around gaily in spring, and tiny fledglings take to wing Blossom drifts down from cherry trees, ‘pink confetti’ swirls on the breeze I pick bunches of daffodils, their trumpets have such fancy frills Weeks of renewal and rebirth - my favourite season on earth Spring rhyme 8 – 12 lines poetry Contest Sponsored By Tania Kitchin 05/07/22

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/10/2022 2:18:00 PM

Wonderful imagery. Hope... Ann

Valsa George

Date: 5/20/2022 3:53:00 AM

Your spring poem is so beautiful Jan.... ! Pink confetti of cherry blossoms and daffodils with trumpets of fancy frills..... are lovely images !

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/18/2022 11:44:00 AM

I so enjoy your nature poems- vive la difference - brilliant poetry! Hugs blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2022 8:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Sensational Spring" paints a lovely write with your words. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2022 1:00:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet Spring poem! hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/11/2022 6:49:00 PM

Sweet as sugar and happy as honey! Super-write. ~ Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/8/2022 4:39:00 PM

I love the pink confetti of cherry trees the most in spring, and the bouncing lambs are adorable :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/8/2022 5:39:00 AM

Love this, Jan, a journey through spring.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/8/2022 12:17:00 AM

We had 23° yesterday, bring it on, hope you are keeping well Jan. Tom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2022 8:45:00 PM

this is so lovely, Jan. A sure win, I bet. Hey, I got me a kitty for Mother's Day and I think Joe feels really good about it too. Did I send you the forward ? It's so adorable. a six week male American Curl. It's a newer breed with ears kind of curled under. Mine is white and blue eyed!!