Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Sensational Spring

A beautiful pastoral scene,
trees adorned in emerald green

Lambs bounce around gaily in spring,
and tiny fledglings take to wing

Blossom drifts down from cherry trees,
‘pink confetti’ swirls on the breeze

I pick bunches of daffodils,
their trumpets have such fancy frills

Weeks of renewal and rebirth -
my favourite season on earth

Spring rhyme 8 – 12 lines poetry Contest

Sponsored By Tania Kitchin

05/07/22

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Ann Foster June 10, 2022 at 2:18 PM Wonderful imagery. Hope... Ann

Valsa George May 20, 2022 at 3:53 AM Your spring poem is so beautiful Jan.... ! Pink confetti of cherry blossoms and daffodils with trumpets of fancy frills..... are lovely images !

Jennifer Proxenos May 18, 2022 at 11:44 AM I so enjoy your nature poems- vive la difference - brilliant poetry! Hugs blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith May 15, 2022 at 8:43 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Sensational Spring" paints a lovely write with your words. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Tania Kitchin May 14, 2022 at 1:00 PM Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet Spring poem! hugs

Gershon Wolf May 11, 2022 at 6:49 PM Sweet as sugar and happy as honey! Super-write. ~ Gershon

Michelle Faulkner May 8, 2022 at 4:39 PM I love the pink confetti of cherry trees the most in spring, and the bouncing lambs are adorable :)

Harry Horsman May 8, 2022 at 5:39 AM Love this, Jan, a journey through spring.

Tom Cunningham May 8, 2022 at 12:17 AM We had 23° yesterday, bring it on, hope you are keeping well Jan. Tom

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2022 at 8:45 PM this is so lovely, Jan. A sure win, I bet. Hey, I got me a kitty for Mother's Day and I think Joe feels really good about it too. Did I send you the forward ? It's so adorable. a six week male American Curl. It's a newer breed with ears kind of curled under. Mine is white and blue eyed!!

Aurore Severo May 7, 2022 at 5:50 PM Very beautiful.

Mike Gentile May 7, 2022 at 12:16 PM A beautiful Spring parfait this is Jan!! Lovely to read! Happy Saturday xxoo

L Milton Hankins May 7, 2022 at 12:00 PM Simply lovely and deserving of recognition, Jan, as I'm almost certain Tania will.

Ilene Bauer May 7, 2022 at 11:51 AM i'm an autumn person myself, jan, but i loved your tribute to spring - very beautifully done!

Rico Leffanta May 7, 2022 at 10:59 AM Millions of Ukrainians would love to experience this NOW . . . .Aloha!