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Senryu- Snow- Stop


is falling down- stop
we went shopping in town- stop
                    now snowed in- stop

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February 17, 2016

Poetry/Senryu/snow stop
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Paul Callus

February 18, 2016 at 3:40 PM

Lovely presentation; quite an unusual senryu! Good thing you finished shopping before getting snowed in:) ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France

February 18, 2016 at 5:06 PM

Thanks for visiting, Paul, well it is for Nathans Telegram contest, so this is what I came up with ...

Timothy Hicks

February 17, 2016 at 11:36 PM

Very unusual senryu. Either you're irritated with the snowfall or you're writing on one of those old telegram machines, in Morse code (lol). I like people that try and take the senryu and go somewhere different with it ... not often will you find much repetition in these minimalist poems!

Constance La France

February 18, 2016 at 12:37 AM

Timothy, thanks for the visit and for nice comment !

Thomas Martin

February 17, 2016 at 1:10 PM

Great use of telegram style! Admire it very much!

Constance La France

February 17, 2016 at 2:50 PM

Thomas, thanks for the great and the compliment ~

Jill Spagnola

February 17, 2016 at 10:38 AM

Constance, I really like your take on the senryu style :) Has the weather in your neck of the woods heeded your command, "stop"? I believe it was you who taught me a little about E.E. Cummings..if i am correct, I want to thank you again. I find the style so lovable:)...do you have a favorite I can take a look at (title)?..I hope the snow stops in time for a snow-day, and a romp in the beautiful white caps before the sun creates mud!!I miss NY

Constance La France

February 17, 2016 at 10:48 AM

Jill, thanks for visiting my poem, I do love EE Cummings and use his style for free verses often, I would have to look at my list of poems to give you a title, we just had a huge snow storm here, as much snow fell in one day as we usually get in a month, that is a lot of snow, the city was at a stand still...

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