Francine Roberts Poet Senryu

Senryu Romance

I awake embraced

       your warm breath tickles my ear

                I pretend to sleep



soft hand on my cheek

       eyes that hold me in their spell

                   ... my happy heart aches

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Elizabeth Wesley April 6, 2012 at 3:27 PM I love it too; filled with soft romance and happy emotions!

Nette Onclaud January 26, 2012 at 7:55 PM now, how can anyone top this, francine...your heart blossoms with sweet love!... getting heady to enter your new contest; gotta wake my muse..thanks too for appreciating my piece for your last " tourey"...:) huggs!

Robert Pettit January 26, 2012 at 10:12 AM A nice pair of romantic senryu. This is more good work from you Francine.

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2012 at 7:47 PM Gosh, your model senryu are off the charts, Francine. WE all need to measure up to THESE!! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire January 25, 2012 at 12:00 PM These are the kinds of moments I dream of, Francine. Having someone to love in your life is so special. Very romantic! Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey January 25, 2012 at 10:52 AM Ah, a romantic write! I do so love these kind of poetry! You did very well with your poem I loved it Francine!! Awesome Work!!

Doris Culverhouse January 25, 2012 at 6:18 AM Francine, you have a passionate poem here....I felt the tickle too! well done!!

Debra Squyres January 25, 2012 at 4:31 AM aweeee....remembered romantic moments just like this...beautiful !!

Kash Poet January 25, 2012 at 1:04 AM Very romantic Senryu and a good example of your contest Francine.Enjoyed the read.

Don Johnson January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM very sweet the lines of interface, when love takes all of you... sidestep from the human race, thoughts of one are really true...