Pandita Sietesantos Poet Senryu

Senryu - One Last Drink

Senryu  - One Last Drink


while binge drinking an
alcoholic vows to quit…
after one last drink


07-15-2018

Contest:     Senryu Contest 
Sponsor:    Mick Talbot
Placement: 1st

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Vladislav Raven November 24, 2018 at 11:30 AM Hi Pandita, much said within such few words. Much belated congratulations on your win Pandita, much deserved. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX Pandita Sietesantos November 24, 2018 at 8:16 PM Thank you my dear friend. Your kind words mean a lot to me! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend. Hugs. Pandita

Anil Deo August 7, 2018 at 5:03 PM Yeah, I must quit also. May I discuss this tomorrow? shalom, shalom Pandita Sietesantos August 8, 2018 at 11:24 AM Hi Anil, thank you my friend for your kind support. Remember to do all things in moderation! Best wishes always. Pandita

Susan Gentry August 6, 2018 at 10:30 AM Congratulations on your top win! Oh I know that feeling... just one more... so glad don't have to do that anymore. :) Pandita Sietesantos August 8, 2018 at 11:20 AM Hi Susan, thank you, my friend for your congratulations and insightful comments. I salute all those who have been able to overcome their addictions, and pray for all those who are still struggling! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper August 6, 2018 at 2:16 AM Nicely done, Pandita, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Pandita Sietesantos August 8, 2018 at 11:18 AM Hi Eve, thank you so very much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Have a lovely day! Best regards. Pandita

Mark Toney August 4, 2018 at 2:18 PM Congratulations on your first place win, Pandita. Very thought-provoking message in 12 short words! Pandita Sietesantos August 4, 2018 at 3:11 PM Hi Mark, thank you so very much my friend for your wonderful, complimentary words which I so greatly appreciate! Best wishes. Pandita

Roy Pett August 4, 2018 at 4:27 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita, so much truth within your well written Senryu. :)) Pandita Sietesantos August 4, 2018 at 3:05 PM Roy, I am so appreciative of your lovely compliments. Thank you very much! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita

Virginia Waters August 4, 2018 at 12:53 AM boom! that sure said it. Good winner Pandita Sietesantos August 4, 2018 at 2:55 PM Hi Virginia, thank you my friend for your kind words of praise. Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier August 3, 2018 at 10:07 PM Sad to watch. Great senryu, Pandita. Congrats on your top win. Pandita Sietesantos August 4, 2018 at 2:48 PM Thank you dear Line for your very kind complimentary words! Hope you are enjoying a lovely weekedn! Hugs. Pandita

Sandra Haight August 3, 2018 at 6:56 PM Yes, for sure it always goes that way for them, Pandita. Well done, and congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra Pandita Sietesantos August 4, 2018 at 2:33 PM Thank you Sandra for your kind words of praise which I greatly appreciate. I am so happy you enjoyed this piece. Hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2018 at 2:37 PM That is exactly how it plays out. Congrats on your win, Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos August 3, 2018 at 2:43 PM Dear Andie, thank you my dear friend for your always lovely compliments which I so very much appreciate! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita

Tom Cunningham August 3, 2018 at 12:19 PM Back with congrats Pandita, cheers. Tom Pandita Sietesantos August 3, 2018 at 12:51 PM Thank you so much, my friend for returning with your kind congratulations! Have a great weekend. Hugs. Pandita

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 3, 2018 at 12:07 PM A vat of truth in that! Awesome Senryu Pandita, hugs and congratulations! xomo :) Pandita Sietesantos August 3, 2018 at 12:51 PM Hi Maureen, thank you so very much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Have a beautiful weekend! Best regards. Pandita

Gershon Wolf July 31, 2018 at 3:41 PM You've nailed it, Pandita … Once an alcoholic, btw, you've never quit drinking until you're dead … Nice senryu! ~ Gershon Pandita Sietesantos August 1, 2018 at 4:25 PM My friend, as always, many thanks, for your kind support and compliments! Unfortunately, that is a true statement about alcoholism! Hope you are doing well! All the very best to you. Pandita

Lunita Blanca July 29, 2018 at 8:49 PM Very well put Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos July 30, 2018 at 8:54 AM Carlos, I very much appreciate your compliment and thank you for stopping by! Best regards. Pandita

Warren Doll July 28, 2018 at 11:51 AM Very well thought out and an excellent Senryu, Pandita. / Warren :) Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2018 at 7:25 PM Thank you, Warren, for your very sweet compliments that I truly appreciate! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Daniel Turner July 21, 2018 at 12:18 PM Very clever, Pandita but so realistic, too. The drugs and the alcohol were easy to quit but the cigarettes are a different story. Pandita Sietesantos July 21, 2018 at 1:22 PM So true any form of addiction is challenging to quit! Thank you kindly, dear friend, for your always supportive and encouraging words! Love and hugs.

Charles Messina July 18, 2018 at 6:19 AM You have spoken such true words...Pandita Like a smoker says, just one last cigarette. Habits ARE so hard to quit. Love this write...Good Luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie :) Pandita Sietesantos July 18, 2018 at 8:45 AM Thank you so very much, Charlie, for your insightful comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice day, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

M. L. Kiser July 17, 2018 at 2:19 PM That's the way it goes for most alcoholics; few are able to quit themselves. Well done. Pandita Sietesantos July 17, 2018 at 3:27 PM It is such an unfortunate truth! Thank you, ML for kindly commenting on this piece! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Lyric Man July 16, 2018 at 8:49 AM Pandita.. I'll drink to that! This was a fun and clever piece much enjoyed! Pandita Sietesantos July 16, 2018 at 9:10 AM Hi LM, thank you so very much! :-) Have a great week ahead! Hugs. Pandita

John Lawless July 15, 2018 at 7:06 PM ...and the vicious cycle continues. Nice one Pandita Pandita Sietesantos July 15, 2018 at 7:37 PM Hi John, thank you, my friend! Yes, it's one big vicious cycle! Have a relaxing evening. Hugs. Pandita

Sunlite Wanter July 15, 2018 at 5:13 PM Oh, what insight you have! Pandita Sietesantos July 15, 2018 at 5:19 PM Awwww! Thank you so very much, Sunlite! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Tom Cunningham July 15, 2018 at 3:34 PM Haha, until the next one. Good luck. Tom Pandita Sietesantos July 15, 2018 at 4:11 PM So happy you like this one, Tom! Thank you so much, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit July 15, 2018 at 3:13 PM So true..well put my friend..my best wishes for a win. Pandita Sietesantos July 15, 2018 at 3:16 PM I'm always honored by your encouraging and supportive visits,my friend! Best regards. Pandita