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Senryu Contest Entry

lovely long hair flips
sexy walk with switching hips
bright red painted lips

emerald round eyes
accepting drinks at the bar
like a star call girl
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Volumes Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Best of Luck with this one Karen I really enjoyed it... its sassy !!
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:02 AM
Thanks Speaks Volumes!
Romios Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 1:31 AM
I like. this very mudh. Can really see her. Wishes from…Pangiie xx
Jones Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 7:59 AM
Thanks Pangie!
Greenhough Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Naughty sounding and well imagined. I like it and may you win.
Jones Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 2:03 PM
lol I don’t think so! But thanks
George Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 10:39 PM
This is indeed a voluptuous image you have sculpted. Great senryu, dear Karen
Jones Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 3:54 AM
Thanks Valsa!
Beaufort Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 5:58 PM
Karen, I think you have this lady pegged. You've captured the perspective of a guy. These are all the things we look for!!
Jones Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:02 PM
lol some of us girls look at guy’s hips too! Thanks for reading Duke!
Manley Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Ohh I see the heels and mini skirt! LOL NICE
Jones Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 10:24 AM
lol thanks Susan!
Roper Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 10:16 PM
awesome description, Karen.
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 11:12 PM
Thanks Eve!
Wolf Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 8:09 PM
Where's my fire extinguisher? Such a hot senryu, Karen. ~ gw
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 8:39 PM
Lol thanks Gershon
Empress Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 1:31 PM
Excellent rhymes in the first senryu and i love how descriptively youv written this dear karen. Sounds like a star! Worth reading about, best wishes for the contest
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 4:35 PM
Thank you Ink Empress!
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Karen, your work is well executed with vivid imagery and eloquent language. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 4:35 PM
Thanks Sotto!
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