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Senryu Contest Entry

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lovely long hair flips sexy walk with switching hips bright red painted lips emerald round eyes accepting drinks at the bar like a star call girl

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/16/2024 1:55:00 AM

Best of Luck with this one Karen I really enjoyed it... its sassy !!

Karen Jones
Date: 3/16/2024 4:02:00 AM

Thanks Speaks Volumes!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/15/2024 1:31:00 AM

I like. this very mudh. Can really see her. Wishes from…Pangiie xx

Karen Jones
Date: 3/15/2024 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Pangie!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/12/2024 1:23:00 PM

Naughty sounding and well imagined. I like it and may you win.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/12/2024 2:03:00 PM

lol I don’t think so! But thanks

Valsa George

Date: 3/11/2024 10:39:00 PM

This is indeed a voluptuous image you have sculpted. Great senryu, dear Karen

Karen Jones
Date: 3/12/2024 3:54:00 AM

Thanks Valsa!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/11/2024 5:58:00 PM

Karen, I think you have this lady pegged. You've captured the perspective of a guy. These are all the things we look for!!

Karen Jones
Date: 3/11/2024 9:02:00 PM

lol some of us girls look at guy’s hips too! Thanks for reading Duke!

Susan Manley

Date: 3/11/2024 9:07:00 AM

Ohh I see the heels and mini skirt! LOL NICE

Karen Jones
Date: 3/11/2024 10:24:00 AM

lol thanks Susan!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2024 10:16:00 PM

awesome description, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2024 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Eve!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/10/2024 8:09:00 PM

Where's my fire extinguisher? Such a hot senryu, Karen. ~ gw

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2024 8:39:00 PM

Lol thanks Gershon

Ink Empress

Date: 3/10/2024 1:31:00 PM

Excellent rhymes in the first senryu and i love how descriptively youv written this dear karen. Sounds like a star! Worth reading about, best wishes for the contest

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2024 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Ink Empress!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/10/2024 8:34:00 AM

Karen, your work is well executed with vivid imagery and eloquent language. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2024 4:35:00 PM

Thanks Sotto!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/10/2024 5:38:00 AM

nicely done, Karen. Best wishes with the contest & have a lovely day, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2024 5:42:00 AM

Thanks dear Sara