Senryu- Ashes Trail Out With the Sky

draped close for the night
film scenes of you have no end -
mourning sobbing starts


3/18/2019

Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge 3- March 2019 - Senryu 
Sponsored by: Dear Heart 

3/20/2019 Poem of the day
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March 24, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Congrats on potd..
Sands Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations for your win Eve :)
Callus Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 2:22 PM
A feeling of sadness and longing...some feelings and memories last for ever. ~ Double Congratulations for your top win and p.o.t.d. Hugs // paul
Gilmour Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 10:10 PM
So many congrats on your top win and POTD Eve, so well deserved for your most beautiful Senryu. Kindest thoughts Ann xx u
La France Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent Senryu~
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 2:55 PM
- Congratulations again ... 1st place in the contest, dear Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 7:28 PM
so touching. Congrats on your POTD.
Ibeh Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Splendid senryu, Eve!:-) Heartiest congratulations on winning POTD! Well-deserved...
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Congratulations on POTD for this moving senryu Eve. Beautifully composed! : ) xxoo
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Thank you, Connie , for your wonderful and inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
Romios Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Hi Eve~congratulations on POTDl Love, Panagiota
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:01 PM
“Thank you, Panagiota. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sands Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations for POTD, Eve. Well done :)
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Hugs Eve ~`*
May Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 12:04 PM
A heartfelt write Eve..Congrats on POTD
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Hugs Eve ~`*
Nicole Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 11:42 AM
Your heart has been through so much. I can feel the sadness within. Memories will always remain. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Thank you,Brandy, for your wonderful and inspiring compliment. Yes, it will stay forever with a little ease each day. Hugs Eve ~`*
Wanter Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 10:15 AM
So many people know what this senryu means. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:04 PM
Thank you, Sunlite, for your wonderful and inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Wonderful to see this piece with POTD honours, congratulations Eve! A lovely day to you dear Poetess, xomo!
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Thank you dear friend. Hugs Eve ~`*
Michael Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations Eve...A lot of feelings in ink...All the best
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Thank you, Arturo. Hugs Eve ~`*
Smith Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 8:23 AM
So sad, congratulations for POTD honors Eve, well done...
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Thank you,Charlie. Hugs Eve ~`*
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on POTD Eve!:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, dear friend for always supporting me. Hugs Eve ~`*
Doll Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 7:31 AM
A total expression of grief in your senryu. Congratulations on POTD, Eve. Warmest wishes~ Warren
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, Warren. Hugs Eve ~`*
Krampe Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Congrats on POTD, Eve!
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Thank you,Agnes. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Congrats Eve on poem of the day..a heartfelt write.
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Hugs Eve ~`*
Warrior Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 6:35 AM
A heartfelt write my friend, great entry Eve...and congrats!!! on POTD!!...love & light...^WW^
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Thank you, ^WW^ . Hugs Eve ~`*
Lawless Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 6:33 AM
a concise and cathartic expression of grief Eve.
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Thank you, John , for your wonderful and inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
Messina Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 6:19 AM
Your sadness has been felt by many of us, Eve. Congratulations on POTD. Charlie
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Thank you, Charles, for always being a special support. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gondolf Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 6:09 AM
Eve, congrats on POTD for this wonderful sad senryu. John
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Thank you, John , for your wonderful and inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
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