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Senryu 3 - Transformed

popular rebel
                                       meets preacher's demure daughter --
                                                    opposites attract

                                                      love blossoms
                                                 rebel is transformed --
                                                     her dying wish





12/29/11 For Andrea's Senryu a Movie Scene contest.

loveromancesadsenryu

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:50:00 PM

KIM..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 10:11:00 PM

YOu did a very nice senryu for a sad romantic movie. Congratulations in the contest I co-judged with Nikko. VEry much enjoyed!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2012 2:37:00 PM

Your winnine senryu captured this movie so well, Kim. Congratulations! Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2012 1:52:00 PM

That was a good movie..I enjoyed it very much..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/7/2012 12:38:00 PM

I love this movie (love the book even more!), and even more the message -- and you captured it well in this couple of senryu, Kim! Congrats on your win.. btw just want to share, I had the privilege of hugging Nicholas Sparks and sort of making a fool of myself, but wow it was worth it :D!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/7/2012 3:08:00 AM

I have not seen this movie but I this senryu paints it as very interesting. Congrats on this New Year's win, Kim. Hope you are doing well. Gwendolen