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senryu 2 14 2025

smallest ickiness irritates sleepiness zees intermittent

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 2/16/2025 9:37:00 AM

My "zees" are pretty intermittent these days, as well. Great senryu, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2025 10:26:00 AM

Sometimes!

Lin Lane

Date: 2/15/2025 2:18:00 AM

That off and on sleep cycle is a bane. It’s plagued me for years. Hope you get the better if it, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2025 4:29:00 AM

Happens to me from time to time. Sleep well, my friend!

Karen Jones

Date: 2/14/2025 9:24:00 PM

A clever write! Like it! Happy Valentines Day Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2025 4:29:00 AM

Thanks, Karen!

Paige Hind

Date: 2/14/2025 1:03:00 PM

Happy Valentine's Day !! <3 I can relate to this poem of yours, lol.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 1:48:00 PM

Thank you! HVD to you too.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/14/2025 10:30:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. Sweet Dreams... Hope you have a Blessed Valentine’s Day as you write away..................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 10:54:00 AM

HVD, too! <3

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/14/2025 8:30:00 AM

delicious, and the sounds too, merci KIm

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Yann!

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 2/14/2025 8:15:00 AM

Good one Kim. Even the smallest irritation or problem can interfere with our sleep. It has happened to me.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2025 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Oliver! Hopefully tonight will be better!