senryu 2 14 2025

smallest ickiness irritates sleepiness zees intermittent
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Slaughter Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 9:37 AM
My "zees" are pretty intermittent these days, as well. Great senryu, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 10:26 AM
Sometimes!
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 2:18 AM
That off and on sleep cycle is a bane. It’s plagued me for years. Hope you get the better if it, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 4:29 AM
Happens to me from time to time. Sleep well, my friend!
Jones Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 9:24 PM
A clever write! Like it! Happy Valentines Day Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 4:29 AM
Thanks, Karen!
Hind Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 1:03 PM
Happy Valentine's Day !! <3 I can relate to this poem of yours, lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 1:48 PM
Thank you! HVD to you too.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 10:30 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Sweet Dreams... Hope you have a Blessed Valentine’s Day as you write away..................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 10:54 AM
HVD, too! <3
Rolland Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 8:30 AM
delicious, and the sounds too, merci KIm
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Mckeithan Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 8:15 AM
Good one Kim. Even the smallest irritation or problem can interfere with our sleep. It has happened to me.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Thank you, Oliver! Hopefully tonight will be better!
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