Anil Deo Poet Senryu

Senryu 2020may31: Jewhichris

I
Life: Jews hallowed it all
Greeks: forced matter from Spirit
Hindus: God is in ALL

II
Matter is about measure
Not real; just words
Creation unties God

NOTE: In the last line above for SENRYU II, "unties" is not a typographical error. Yes, one could replace UNties with "unites" but my point is really, God is both immanent and transcendent. Those who love Nature ... begin discovering that.

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 31, 2020 at 10:22 AM Another intriguing, sating, food for thought offering. Thank you. xomo Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 31, 2020 at 11:41 AM ...the poet who labelled me a tart had no idea the possible negative connotation of the term. I let him know, but I don't think he really appreciated the depth of insult he was slinging. When my hubby calls me tart, it is a sweet thing, when I call myself tart, it is a funny thing. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 31, 2020 at 11:38 AM Clearly you are intelligent, i read you; dumb, as in unable to speak, I would not know, I read you. ;), ...not being able to call me Tart, I know that you are kind. Anil Deo May 31, 2020 at 10:56 AM Om Mo! AUM and shalom Dear Pigeon Princess ( I still can't call you TART. Am i dumb or smart?)

Regina Mcintosh May 31, 2020 at 8:32 AM Interesting poem. I am intrigued. Blessings and love sent your way, Happy writing, Gina Anil Deo May 31, 2020 at 8:35 AM Thanks for your encouraging comment, Gina. shalom shalom or Peace Plus HEALING (in Hebrew)