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senryu 2020May31: JEWHICHRIS

I Life: Jews hallowed it all Greeks: forced matter from Spirit Hindus: God is in ALL II Matter is about measure Not real; just words Creation unties God NOTE: In the last line above for SENRYU II, "unties" is not a typographical error. Yes, one could replace UNties with "unites" but my point is really, God is both immanent and transcendent. Those who love Nature ... begin discovering that.

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Date: 5/31/2020 10:22:00 AM
Another intriguing, sating, food for thought offering. Thank you. xomo
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Mo The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/31/2020 11:41:00 AM
...the poet who labelled me a tart had no idea the possible negative connotation of the term. I let him know, but I don't think he really appreciated the depth of insult he was slinging. When my hubby calls me tart, it is a sweet thing, when I call myself tart, it is a funny thing.
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Mo The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/31/2020 11:38:00 AM
Clearly you are intelligent, i read you; dumb, as in unable to speak, I would not know, I read you. ;), ...not being able to call me Tart, I know that you are kind.
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Anil Deo
Date: 5/31/2020 10:56:00 AM
Om Mo! AUM and shalom Dear Pigeon Princess ( I still can't call you TART. Am i dumb or smart?)
Date: 5/31/2020 8:32:00 AM
Interesting poem. I am intrigued. Blessings and love sent your way, Happy writing, Gina
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Anil Deo
Date: 5/31/2020 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for your encouraging comment, Gina. shalom shalom or Peace Plus HEALING (in Hebrew)