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Senryu

it is getting dim my vision fades more each day- I hear birds singing ______________________ January 22, 2021 Poetry/Senryu Copyright Protected, ID 01-1323-043-22 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the contest, All Yours (Jan 22) Contest 902 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/23/2021 First Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/25/2021 10:52:00 AM

Can't help but think of the saying that when God closes a door He opens a window. You have framed that hope so beautifully Constance. Many congrats on your win. Blessings my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 1/26/2021 8:16:00 AM

Sam, thank you so much for the comment and the congrats, I do have issues with my eyesight that no glasses can fix, maybe risky surgery or ? _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 1/24/2021 6:17:00 PM

so beautifully penned Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2021 7:25:00 AM

Jan, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats and hugs _Constance

Elaine George

Date: 1/24/2021 6:21:00 AM

This is such a powerful SENRYU, dear heart. I am saving this to my fav list...It is a true Masterpiece. The message is so uplifting...filled with the will to go on and make the best. MAGNIFICANT! So much conveyed in so few words. ~ Elaine

Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2021 9:15:00 AM

Elaine, thank you so much for the lovely comment and the FAV, that is why I love senryu and haiku, as a poet can say so much in a few words _Constance

Karen Croft

Date: 1/23/2021 6:08:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Best of luck.

Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2021 5:17:00 PM

Karen, thanks for the visit and the beautiful _Constance