Senryu

the deceit and lies
flow so freely and smoothly
mesmerizing some

Written July 26, 2018
Entered: Senryu Contest
Sponsor: Mick Talbot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Elle Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:07 PM
I used to be honey-mouthed and dagger-hearted! Kudos Lady CK
Krutsinger Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Hmm, I can think of someone matching this description.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 8:42 PM
It flowed so fast and furiously, believe me!
Sergi Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 1:04 PM
a short but widespread in intonation. my compliments, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Ralph. I take a happy proud bow.
Sands Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Great one Caren :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Love the message, Caren.
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