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Senryu - Transitions

one flickering light at the end of a dark hall… hospice nurse running Date: 19 Mar 2019 Contest: Writing Challenge 3- March 2019 - Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2019 5:36:00 PM

that light not a good omen! I see this was a winner a while back. Belated Congrats. Good to read you again today.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/20/2019 7:00:00 PM

David, oh my, I hate to hear those words. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France

Date: 3/20/2019 4:52:00 PM

David, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Senryu ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2019 2:42:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great win, David :) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/19/2019 4:58:00 PM

your words touched me deeply David as my dad died in hospice and i wrote a poem called the crying candle when he was diagnosed with terminal cancer and i read it at the funeral seevice:-) So lovely to see you back posting:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/19/2019 10:48:00 AM

wow, great use of mood, david.. nice to read you again...huggs