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Senryu-Reality Check Please

reality check please



our reality
stuck within the matrix or...
watching the boob tube 



5/7/5-senryu




Oct.25.2018
Haiku-Senryu- Writing Challenge 
Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
a.k.a. Broken Wings 


Placed 3'rd [4'th of 6]

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/29/2018 3:49:00 PM

Thought-provoking, Winged Warrior! Janice

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/29/2018 1:46:00 PM

Yep, that pretty much sums up the excitement in my life, WW. LOL Excellent senryu! Congrats on your win. Dear Heart has another, similar contest going now. Hugs, Carolyn

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/28/2018 7:32:00 PM

Reality Check, or Boob Tube?? No way!!! I knew it was both, and I was correct. :) Once again my Winged Warrior, your words touch the sky. Congratulations on this win. Love and Check Please. Lol. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 10/28/2018 9:54:00 AM

This is one of my fav's, WW Excellent Senryu...I think most of us can relate to...Love & peace and boob tubes...C harlie

John Lawless

Date: 10/28/2018 9:14:00 AM

...our reality....the ultimate fantasy. Nicely done WW. the perplexing blue light question...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/28/2018 6:20:00 AM

Excellent. Interesting and well imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2018 5:40:00 PM

I'll take the boob tube. I never got the matrix.heehee. Congrats. I loved the picture you put with this too.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2018 5:00:00 PM

An excellent senryu, WW, so is the accompanying gif. Congratulations on your deserved win. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2018 3:16:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great Senryu win, W.W. :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/27/2018 5:08:00 AM

Hi WW, Your title and content for the contest is spot on. I wish the best of luck for the contest. PS, that image was way out:-) Alexis

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/27/2018 2:58:00 AM

Hi John, an interesting write. Reads like reality to me. Loved the content as usual my friend. An excellent write. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/26/2018 12:00:00 AM

This was a reality check for me; I think I am in the matrix, trying to fight my way back out.

Charles Messina

Date: 10/25/2018 9:14:00 PM

I love this WW, an absolute reality check. Best wishes for a win in the contest. Love ,peace & reality...CM

Silent One

Date: 10/25/2018 4:37:00 PM

Nice image.. Interesting one this one..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/25/2018 1:47:00 PM

Hmm, perhaps it is a little of both. Just my simple thinking though. :) Once again- your words bring a smile my Warrior with Wings. Love and Reality. ~ Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/25/2018 12:00:00 PM

- Awesome, W.W. - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)