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Senility's Tightrope Collab With Cd

She sits in silence at the end of day Beside the fire that barely warms the air Her mind in anguish, threads that tend to fray Companionless, within a room austere. Like a carousel swirling around me Are faces, places, traces of my life These disjointed images confound me Recollections sliced by a jagged knife. The curtains drawn; the door chains are in place Her thoughts are roaming down the paths of night A hint of sadness settles on her face As shadows flicker in the waning light. There was a man, can’t remember his name But such fine features graced his handsome face My wild, young heart his soothing words would tame As I danced with him in chantilly lace. She can’t help thinking of the years that pass The complications of advancing age Life hard to handle just like fragile glass Progressive weakness in initial stage. How easily we swayed across the floor Effortlessly as an orchestra played An oceanside hall at some unknown shore Lord knows, I felt like such a lucky maid! She fears the fading of a priceless stock Each recollection slipping from her grip Memorabilia gathered round the clock Accumulated in her lifetime trip. Oh, to feel young and pain-free one more time But this man’s gone now, and with him, my hope My mind wanders back to days of my prime As I tread on senility’s tightrope. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ *Poem co-written by Paul Callus and Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 5/22/2018 1:13:00 PM
Wow! Your poem is expressed with illuminating sensitivity and with such emotional elegance, Paul. You’ve penned a masterful collaboration with Carolyn and your enlightening poem handles the subject matter with poignant beauty. Exquisite and moving poetry my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes and hugs always. ~Susan
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/26/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I can assure you that Carolyn too will love your insightful comments! So glad that you were moved by our subject matter. ~ Warm wishes & hugs my friend. // paul
Date: 4/11/2018 8:32:00 AM
Holy Crow! Fantastic collaboration. You two did a work of art together. Fancy footwork and capable pens come to mind.
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2018 11:49:00 AM
Many thanks, Rhoda. Your lovely feedback is truly appreciated:) Regards // paul
Date: 4/4/2018 9:02:00 PM
Love this gleaming and well crafted rhyme my friend. Both of you have composed a golden treasure Hugs Eve~`*
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/7/2018 4:42:00 PM
Yours are lovely and generous comments, dear Eve...thank you! I'm sure Carolyn will be pleased to read them, too. Hugs // paul
Date: 4/4/2018 7:34:00 PM
LIke I told Carolyn, this is SUPER fine. It's obvious how hard you both worked on this and how much feeling you put into it.
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Date: 4/7/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Once an idea crops up it soon develops into a fully fledged poem, and yes, we both take serious pleasure in co-writing! Regards // paul
Date: 4/3/2018 1:32:00 PM
This is one of the best collabs I have read... A subject that is relavant to many people...
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/7/2018 4:27:00 PM
Your complimentary remarks are appreciated, S-1...thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 4/3/2018 3:05:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration Paul, the advancing years can be so cruel sometimes. Memories surface then fade. Tom
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Date: 4/7/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. You are right...we are free to live in denial, but truth cannot be erased! Regards // paul
Date: 4/3/2018 1:53:00 AM
Excellent. Very sensitively penned poem on aging. Age never bothered me either. A great collaboration.
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Date: 4/7/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Ravi. Blessed are those who manage to take life and advancing age with a pinch of salt:) Regards // paul
Date: 4/3/2018 1:45:00 AM
Great collaboration, Paul and Carolyn. Such a sad, difficult topic.
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Date: 4/7/2018 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes. Many talk about the benefits of old age, yet deep down we know that drawbacks exist, too! Regards // paul
Date: 4/2/2018 9:25:00 PM
Living with only memories gets damn lonesome at times. A wonderful collaboration Paul and Carolyn. You two always bring your best when you write together. So nice to hear from you again Carolyn, you are missed. Paul, it's always a pleasure to read your poems. That tightrope is pretty darned crowded Carolyn.
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Date: 4/7/2018 3:23:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed our combined effort, Danny. It's always a pleasure to work with Carolyn...it's like having a pleasant chat over a nice cup of tea and cake:) As for the tightrope, I'd rather be on this than the one used to cross the Niagara Falls! Regards // paul
Date: 4/2/2018 5:13:00 PM
Congrats Paul and Carolyn, such a sensitively penned poem on aging, your words gave me a huge lump in my throat especially when i think of the people in mum's care home:-( adding to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/11/2018 4:37:00 PM
Jan, I can't tell you how much your comment meant. Hope your mother is doing well.
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/6/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I'm still catching up on accumulated mail! I am sure that this topic is one that many can relate to. Hugs // paul
Date: 4/2/2018 5:08:00 PM
Just wanted to thank you for writing with me again, Paul. It's always a pleasure.
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2018 4:20:00 PM
The pleasure is mine, Carolyn. It is a gift to be able to inspire and be inspired. Thank you...Hugs // paul
Date: 4/2/2018 5:04:00 PM
Well done collaboration on aging! My parents now 79 and 80. I hug them tight everytime I see them. 6AT
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. We owe a lot to our parents. Best regards // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/2/2018 5:46:00 PM
Yes, be sure to show them the love that's in your heart, Kim. My mother died young and I've always wished I could go back and tell her just one more time how much I love her.

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