"sendah"

That I sit in this studio, is because "Sendah" came to me in a dream.

"Cheater" said he would cheat me out of a good life, if I did not paint him.

Cautiously I tried, but could not do him justice.

Always when he looked, he took a color away from me.

Ninety times, Soon I was left with just carbonated charcoal.

Now he had stripped me of my expression.

Oral voice had taken my joy in vermillion.

Nightly. he split in half, my face, and wrote war on my forehead.

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I was torn and angry.

I sketched him and he was immortalized, but I kept it.

He had nothing, but effort to look at. 

***WON 4TH PLACE IN THE CONTEST***
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 "SELF PORTRAIT" about "ZERO_HERO" 
entered in Native American Ekphrasis contest
http://www.tccannon.com/art.html
The poem is divided because the first half is Acrostic
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La France Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations on your win.. very nice poem
Strand Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Congrats on your succes in Abe's contest Sandra Rgds Brian.
Winter Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Hey - I just sat back down here to congratulate YOU! Well deserved congrats yourself on an outstanding write! I knew this would be a winner for sure. Love rereading it. Hugs, miss you, Shar xoxo
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Such an interesting twist, Sandra...well deserving a win in this wonderful contest! Congratulations to a talented poetress!! Love, Carrie
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June 30, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
Moreno Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Sandra, congrats with your success in the contest...Raul
Lopez Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 10:41 AM
congratulations you have won 4th place in the contest."Native American Ekphrasis"(t.c. cannon) Thank you for supporting my contest. ..........Alopez
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May 29, 2009 at 4:23 PM
i would have to agree with Senduh custer did rob his nation of a generation. but there are many custers still in this world at war right now. just because you don't read about them does'nt mean they wern't censored or the details redacted. evil stil exist. jhl
Winter Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 5:55 AM
Wow, love your imagination, and this goes deep. You are so brilliant! Love it! Good luck! Love, Shar
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Awesome poem about a very intriguing painting! Very nice, Alexandra! Love, Carolyn
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