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2nd in Choose a Line 3 (Sponsor: Joseph May)

Judged: June 7th, 2025

"By the squeaky old gate that tomorrow will find,"
kindness is a necessary handkerchief:
convex lips to meet mine with gentle understanding
words that tenderize as a snarling babe sedated by mother's milk

Please wait for me there
never minding fallen appearances 
spider veins spindled in my corporation - bogus skins - 
depleted gums, haunted eyes 

Extend a posy, a leaf of scripture, a lump of sugar
be impressed at the flounce of this wisteria skirt
and silver-studded circulation stockings
in remembrance of my blush

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/19/2025 11:04:00 AM
I don't know whence this came or even what it really means, but I still want more of it, Trina. The muscularity of language and rhythm is stunning.
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Date: 6/7/2025 6:51:00 PM
Very nicely penned Trina, Congrats on your win
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Trina Layne
Date: 6/7/2025 7:38:00 PM
Appreciated, Joseph! Great prompts.
Date: 6/5/2025 9:44:00 PM
I love the way this flows and unfolds!
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Trina Layne
Date: 6/6/2025 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Karen! I am happy you enjoyed it.

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