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Resultado de imagen para decayed headstone image

Mossy vines served as camouflage for a decaying headstone Lying the corpse of his beloved in the antique cemetery Betrayed by her heart that stopped by immense emotions Losing the flower of his garden in their wedding ceremony Tomb was visited by the weeping gentleman every morning Leaving a bouquet of white roses as a symbol of their love Remembering the day when they met in an afternoon stroll Recognizing each other that true love will bloom in their hearts One year later, the gentleman was found dead near the tomb Cemetery caretaker notified to the authorities about the decease Heart broken heart was the determined cause of his expiration A white rose was hidden near the tomb, as a symbol of eternal love For Camouflage Me a Poem Sponsored by Broken Wings Third Place 8-5-2016

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Date: 8/12/2016 11:03:00 PM
Nayda, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem and I love the image also !
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you Constance. An excellent poem.
Date: 8/12/2016 9:47:00 AM
Congrats Nayda to win on your wonderful poem. love
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Anisha
Date: 8/11/2016 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nayda:) Awesome write on heartbreak:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 8/10/2016 11:27:00 PM
Hi Nayda, I agree with Luloo this is sad beautiful. True love doesn't stop. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 8/10/2016 9:43:00 PM
Nayda, this is beautiful yet sad. But through it all eternal love prevails always...congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/10/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thank you Laura

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