Sempiternity Love

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Resultado de imagen para decayed headstone image

Mossy vines served as camouflage for a decaying headstone 
Lying the corpse of his beloved in the antique cemetery
Betrayed by her heart that stopped by immense emotions
Losing the flower of his garden in their wedding ceremony

Tomb was visited by the weeping gentleman every morning
Leaving a bouquet of white roses as a symbol of their love
Remembering the day when they met in an afternoon stroll
Recognizing each other that true love will bloom in their hearts

One year later, the gentleman was found dead near the tomb
Cemetery caretaker notified to the authorities about the decease
Heart broken heart was the determined cause of his expiration
A white rose was hidden near the tomb, as a symbol of eternal love



For Camouflage Me a Poem
Sponsored by Broken Wings
Third Place
8-5-2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/12/2016 11:03:00 PM
Nayda, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem and I love the image also !
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you Constance. An excellent poem.
Date: 8/12/2016 9:47:00 AM
Congrats Nayda to win on your wonderful poem. love
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Anisha
Date: 8/11/2016 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nayda:) Awesome write on heartbreak:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 8/10/2016 11:27:00 PM
Hi Nayda, I agree with Luloo this is sad beautiful. True love doesn't stop. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/12/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 8/10/2016 9:43:00 PM
Nayda, this is beautiful yet sad. But through it all eternal love prevails always...congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/10/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thank you Laura
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