Janice Canerdy Poet Personification

Semicolon's Love Letter To Period

I know you're just a tiny dot,
			but in the world of writing, not		
			a mark more powerful exists.
			When thoughts get jammed up, you insist
			they separate and free your spot.

			When composition chaos reigns,
			you enter. Sentences regain
			their clarity. There's none like you.
			The comma and conjunction do
			their part, but champion you remain.
			
			We both perform our jobs with verve.
			I, semicolon, also serve
			to punctuate; but I’m not strong
			like YOU, my hero. Am I wrong
			to want you? I know; I’ve got nerve! 

			I’ve been in love with you for years.
			Now, please allay this lady’s fears
			and say you love and want me too!
			I’ll bid my loneliness adieu.
			Our friends, the question marks, will cheer.


June 16, 2019, entered in Brian Strand's Your Choice (10) Personification Poetry Contest

May 20, 2021
entered in the Personification Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Peter Wolveridge July 8, 2019 at 9:15 PM Brilliant poem Janice, written in clear, punctuated English, what a treat to read. An amazing tribute to a simple dot - unbelievable! Best regards, Peter Janice Canerdy July 8, 2019 at 10:34 PM Peter, THANK YOU so much! Janice

Caren Krutsinger July 2, 2019 at 7:00 AM I am glad this poem won. Who else could make a period sound so terrific? Nobody. It took you! Janice Canerdy July 2, 2019 at 9:17 AM Caren, your comment has made my day. THANK YOU! Janice

Kim Rodrigues July 1, 2019 at 7:45 PM Cute! The period is simply the best. (See what I did there.) Janice Canerdy July 1, 2019 at 8:35 PM Yep! Thanks, Kim! :-)

Lindsay Laurie June 24, 2019 at 7:10 PM G'day Janice … you've certainly excelled with this verse Janice. I did enjoy reading it - thank you - Lindsay Janice Canerdy June 24, 2019 at 9:30 PM Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice

Susan Ashley June 22, 2019 at 8:01 PM Oh, I just love this, Janice. I was enchanted with each and every line. A delightfully creative and charming poem. Congratulations on your excellent win with this enthralling personification. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Janice Canerdy June 22, 2019 at 8:59 PM Thank you for this GREAT comment, Susan! Janice

Ilene Bauer June 16, 2019 at 3:53 PM bravo! this is absolutely magical, janice! i love it! Janice Canerdy June 16, 2019 at 4:16 PM Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice

John Lawless June 16, 2019 at 9:01 AM AH, on ode to the era of the period and a hope for its return. Janice Canerdy June 16, 2019 at 12:05 PM Yes, indeed, John! Thanks for the comment. Janice

Vijay Pandit June 16, 2019 at 7:41 AM This is such a brilliant poem..I enjoyed every word..kudos for your originality, Janice. An excellent write--sure to win at the TOP. Janice Canerdy June 16, 2019 at 12:06 PM Vijay, thanks a million for your comment! Janice