Semblances

Unhinged the face dwelling beyond the pale.
Seeming slightly off, a kilter, behind the glass
a semblance of a mother, grand and wife
whose sojourn upon this life is passed.

How familiar yet, not..that face can be
each wrinkle timely placed by strife
whose sojourn upon this life is passed
a semblance of a mother, grand and wife.

Are we not to be ourselves at all
must mere copies be we, alone alas;
a semblance of a mother, grand and wife
whose sojourn upon this life is passed.

Few sightings of an inner self are seen
the form, the flesh, the vessel so contrive
whose sojourn upon this life is passed
a semblance of a mother, grand and wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/31/2010 8:03:00 AM
A wonderful poem, congratulations on your fine win. Caryl
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Date: 3/31/2010 3:06:00 AM
Fine poem, my congratulations on your well deserved win, Deborah. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/30/2010 8:00:00 PM
This rings so true, In her endeavours to fill her many rolls a woman cane lose sight of her self. I think this is a magnificent poem of great feeling. well done Deborah
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:51:00 PM
This was an awesome poem Deborah and deserved the HM..... Keep em coming, thank you and congrats.....:JP]
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Date: 3/30/2010 3:50:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in Jared's contest .. a wonderful honor for a wonderful write from a wonderful poetess and friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/30/2010 2:36:00 PM
Terrific and you kept true to the form. Joyce
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Date: 3/30/2010 12:53:00 PM
Terrific write (I would have put it higher in the contest!) ...Congratulations on your win in the contest, Debbie! ~:)
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:15:00 PM
Kind of a dark write from you there, Deb. Sad and how quickly time passes and we are just behind glass. A very interesting write and the way your last two lines kept alternating! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/7/2010 11:16:00 AM
Lovely, the hidden message is delivered and I completely comprehend what you are trying to tell. The third stanza says it all. A masterpiece indeed, lovely. Love, Sami.
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Date: 3/6/2010 9:52:00 PM
Very well written quatrain and lovely to read. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/6/2010 12:55:00 PM
Good one, Susan
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Date: 3/6/2010 9:48:00 AM
A Being that maintains Agape's morality, can be whatever it desires to be. A doctor, a lawer a poet, just let it be love that sow it! Thanks for your comment on Blog. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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