Self-Like Precision

Raven on my shoulder, emitting faint smolder,
swirling, formed a vision with self-like precision.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 1:18 AM
Your internal rhyming brings depth to what the raven was doing, A fine Alexandrine Las. Loved it
Fowler Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 6:39 AM
I fancied this one was a little eerie. Thanks my dear friend! :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 2:15 PM
Creative work. I am wondering about this one lots of questions running through my head. Thanks for sharing this unique one. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Many thanks dear Sara. An interesting form. Try it! Thanks for stopping by and commenting! :)
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