Self-Imposed Alienation

I’m lodged in this train on a top spot
yet alone...while others trace a  blue noon amiably,
As  dewed  mist  holds me immovable
From my row ... the  toot  of a loud whistle
makes me want to peep out restlessly.

This journey is intermittent through  my solos of night,
where most wayfarers gig on-- animated, pleasant--
and they know where they're headed to, come  eve,
this clear level of certainty... a destination so sure
relishing  coffee, time's sagas  with much fervor:
Here I am, listening to their seemingly  deified hums  
as  the tenet of my life idly churns like rusted wheels, 
that a hazy eye gazes at an aching moon
its glint wondering about my self- imposed deed of alienation.



Palindromes Contest for Joseph May
5/20/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:03 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your fine win.
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:33 PM
Nicely done, Nette, congratulations on your Palindromes win... Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Well done, nette. Congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Oh, yes--alone in a crowd. Been there, done that! Well done, Nette. CONGRATS. Janice
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Many congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
Gentry Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations on your win with this palindrome. Well done.
May Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Very nicely penned Nette..thanks for entering...Congrats on your win
Warrior Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 6:27 AM
Nicely done nette...best of luck my friend...love and light...^WW^
Sergi Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 5:29 PM
This is great, nette! My entry was more minor than yours and I wish you well!
Pandit Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Well written nette..apt for the contest, a journey well depicted..best for a win.
Wanter Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 3:29 PM
I can identify with the feelings you evoked in this lovely poem, if not the personalized facts.
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 3:25 PM
- Very well done, Nette ! - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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