Self Sacrifice - Triple Tetractys Contest

his
finger 
was firmly
stuck in the hole
stopping Netherlands from going under

fact or is it fiction hope Mary* knows 
little dutch boy
perceived haste 
blocking
dyke

used
sense ...yet
did not know
finger in  hole
would through history grow to greater lengths

* Mary Mapes Dodge  The American Writer.

penned 8 July 2016

1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3,4 and 10 syllable count used
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:19 AM
great topic for this contest, that story sounds familiar to me! Congrats.
Roberts Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Thx Andrea...it is well known....Seren
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Wow, Seren! Congrats!
Roberts Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 1:58 AM
Thanks Kim what a surprise for me... Seren
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Whoo - Hoo ! Congratulations on your Triple Tetractys contest, Seren, perfect form and wonderful poem. Hugs Eve
Roberts Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 1:59 AM
Eve thank you for placing my poem....Seren
Shanmugam Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Very nice Robert:)
Roberts Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Thank you so much...Seren
Roberts Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 1:59 AM
Thank you so much...Seren
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