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Self Pitying Me

i’m good when ok and ok when not too sad who cares anyway how I feel about today this tanka makes me look bad By David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 5:09:00 AM

I am determined to try another tanka today. I kind of like them, and I had forgotten they exist until this second.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 8:45:00 AM

Tankas are a great way to escape the constrictions of the haikus, good for you, I’ll be checking it out later, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2021 6:44:00 AM

Hello David Kavanagh, we all get depressed. This tanka makes you feel sad. You need something to uplifting. Cheers ! Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2021 8:46:00 AM

Hello David Kavanagh, I am glad to hear that you are fine. yes I am well thankyou. Cheers! Darlene

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/12/2021 8:14:00 AM

Heya Darlene, no I’m fine just a little rhyming ironic tanka, to share on the soup, hope your well today also, thanks for checking it out cheers David