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Self Pity

Blue deep Water; drifting through The light, and out of nowhere Was a blue boat with yellow sails Perusing the sand, I saw a man Walking towards the waves of destination He called out to deaf ears, and numbness And the blue boat drifted on Clouds of grey speckled the main distance Of real and beyond Holding out hands, others called But the boat drifted Drifted on.....

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Date: 8/11/2012 4:17:00 PM
Outstanding piece my poet friend. Images are so powerful Michael
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