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Self Less

Self, behind the glass, seldom seen in shafts of sun pondering life’s banalities, as from its gifts, you run.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/26/2013 2:15:00 PM

Hmm...What do I see?? a very good piece, most expressive, greatly highlighting the contradictory facets of life Debbie, pleased to have read.'

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/22/2013 2:10:00 PM

Great portrayal of how one wants to escape when thoughts of inadequacy strike. The fears we face shine through perfectly in this poem :)

Kash Poet

Date: 6/18/2013 1:12:00 PM

Very nice couplet here Debi.Enjoyed.

Len Gasun

Date: 6/16/2013 9:40:00 AM

A very wonderful couplet! I love it! Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend Deb & your precious time stopping by on my latest poem. love lots & big hugs, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2013 2:26:00 PM

Nice one,Debs and so much reflection in two little lines!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/15/2013 11:36:00 AM

love this clever write, Debs - congrats on your wins : )

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2013 4:53:00 AM

This is lovely, Debbie! Very profound and deep. Yes...sometimes it is easier to run, but then we miss all that warmth. Have a great weekend.

Constance La France

Date: 6/14/2013 7:44:00 AM

Debbie, this is outstanding, best of luck if for a contest and I would like to thank you for my placement in your Haiku Wannabee Contest, I am very honoured, Constance

Jack Ellison

Date: 6/13/2013 3:05:00 PM

Must apologize... haven't around much lately! Hope you still love me! LOL I've been neglecting my friends.... moving next Tuesday and hopefully back on track after that! Hugs, Jack xoxox

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/12/2013 1:03:00 PM

Quite profound oh cool one xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2013 12:24:00 PM

a most enduring couplet with beautifully cryptic lines.... thank you debbie for acknowledging my piece for your contest...:) huggs

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/12/2013 8:26:00 AM

Hi Debbie, It is cute, deep and profound..Thanks for my place in your winners list and for your comments!!

Kate Wilderson

Date: 6/11/2013 10:46:00 PM

Amazing!

Cathy Moore

Date: 6/11/2013 7:02:00 PM

very interesting

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2013 5:49:00 PM

Such a pleasant surprise that you liked my first attempt at Dixdeux. O with this trio of poems for your contest! Thanks much for that , and for introducing me to another new form! I am always learning something new from you!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/10/2013 7:13:00 PM

This is so human, finding that lack of self....or self confidence looking back.....or feeling rather unimportant and lacking. I think more women than men will identify with his poem.. ps....soupmail coming, Deb.