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Self Inflcted

The drop of blood hit the clear water exploding, dispersing like smoke in air. A second drop then a third in the same manner, my very being drains before my eyes. Plink, plonk, the waters hue now a subtle shade of pink, deeper with every droplet. I now gaze that rouge reflection and think to myself, it's about time I put a new razor blade in this razor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/1/2010 6:51:00 AM
Deep... Infliction I was in suspense throughout this read..... xoxoxoxox
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Date: 3/23/2010 7:19:00 PM
Would be a wise idea Daniel.. a neat and cool write ..has the reader suspenseful till the last line.. another enjoyable read..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:21:00 PM
you jest and I love it hehehe .....Always Allie
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Date: 3/22/2010 9:44:00 AM
Daniel, I could go several different ways with this one...From very serious to humorous..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:54:00 AM
A very well written poem .I have enjoyed reading ...
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:00:00 AM
Like this one Daniel - You had me going there lol - Sucker I guess - Fab share -:)
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