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A SERIOUSLY FUNNY POEM ABOUT ADDICTION TO MENTOS CANDY MINTS
SELF HELP POEM


Self help Poem: It started off with one-
I was really startled by the potency
I was overwhelmed by it -
It seemed to disappear faster than
I could afford to be without it.
I wanted it to last longer,I upped it by two.
That burst of euphoria traveling faster than
the time it took to think it.
 
I mean before I could mellow
out and write a whole poem,
I had already required three;
Three in my mouth same time-
melting on my tongue dispersing
flavorful burst of peppermint
"Mentos" it was like a big distraction --
I couldn't write for long-
Not knowing if this would be
the last bursting sensation
I would experience for tonight.
 
I am down to one pack. My fingers are
clawing open the packaging, there is only
one left deep down.-
I am terrified, It's is so good,
My mouth is making my brain jealous.
 
I cram in the Last one.,
a poem comes - I can't concentrate.
Mentos excites my attitude.
I want to thank them;
Them who dumps pure exotic
peppermint oil into a candy that
is so sooo chewy and sweet,
Inducing erotic feelings and fear...
Mentos I can not get enough of you,
two packs down and I
sit praying for the will-power
not to suck another Mentos tonight.
Ok the Mentos, in my mouth is almost dissolved;
I am looking at the last package... I am scared

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/15/2014 10:41:00 AM
Hello Vicki, If you intended for this poem to arouse the reader, girl, you slammed it. Erotic chose of words to express "Mentos." Stay strong, keep your head to the sky. Ken
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 12/16/2014 5:04:00 PM
OH REALLY? I thought it was more about addiction lol but as I look again you may be right. Thanks, That is why comments are so needed hmmm I did go there didn't I
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