Self- Discovery

Wobbly, these feet… sagging on miles
of dangled reeds: a hike takes me
to an attic of moonlight, bestowing bows
of serenity prayers for wayfarers
unyielding to a precise compass
of direction, reckless as it were, 
losing the self to gypsy stones
and nomadic thistles bearing my trails...
for a moment, I release this soul buried
in the belly to a chorale of air's hymns
taking flight unto a  trail of obedience 
moved by pure lightness: no longer a weight
or content divided, but  equaled by 
forms of singularly whole reminisces...
 


            
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Poetry Unhinged for john lawless
8/29/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lawless Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Nette, it was easy to get lost in this meditative metaphor. After several readings it still draws me in to question my purpose for being. Thanks for participating in the contest.
Hamilton Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Just beautiful this introspective view of yourself, stunning in the visuals portrayed, congrats on your fine placement in a difficult contest.
Scars Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Nette, beautiful lady! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Beautiful, Nette. I loved your journey into self. Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Congrats on your win Nette
Fraser Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Hi Nette , i think the search is a never ending thing for every poet bringing us to miles of odes and wisdom to pass to others. Great write my friend.Blessings Carl
May Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 3:58 PM
A beautiful journey and a fine write Nette...
Datu Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 3:21 PM
I see a bit of myself in you-- the journey of self-reflection and maybe, immersion into a space that dwells inside. Very few can capture this moment in living poetry!
Lalion Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 3:12 PM
You took me to this place of "looking within" with your impeccable poem. Masterfully crafted and a pleasure to read.
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 2:58 PM
....... I hope you will find your "lucky stars", Nette :) - Beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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