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Sky, Freedom, Happiness, Relieved

Relax It is only for this time that we live testing the fiber of our faith Repeat All of life will be satisfied from butterfly to bee. My gods got it. Let go. 5/7/20 Let the Pens Flow - Butterfly Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2020 6:56:00 AM

such an uplifting poem Janis, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 11:16:00 PM

Such an innovative crafting of your poem with its message in the 2 syllable lines - relax, repeat, let go. So nicely done. Congratulations on you winning placement.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/14/2020 9:42:00 AM

testing the fiber of our faith..Great message.. Congrats Janis..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 5:43:00 AM

"from butterfly to bee"...yes we all transform and live. Beautiful :)