Selenophila

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Image of Moon Clouds Air provided by Pixabay. *Selenophila Ballet of calm swans glissades, silhouette placed culled singles tryst, pond sides by vast knoll, balters few burbled matches. Grasped sunset whilst espy eyes pry, as through a peephole, faint lights pair, a porcelain minuet. Lain on their fleeces, woolgathering whirled -- supine visages, prompt smeared tattooed rouge -- upgrades furtive vagary functions, twirled tendrils e'er sensing blond frames ... whelve amour amongst enthused pristine hearts, fused refuge sonder renaissance ere night's prism, savior per drawn orphic sight, a ringed rainbow moon, selenophiles resplendent moored grandeur flame, epoch pairs euphoric dulcet swoon. *Selenophila: Loving the moon and finding it soothingly captivating. 2021 May 19 *4th Place* Summer love sonnet ~~John Hamilton: Judged 2021 May 24

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John Hamilton

Date: 5/24/2021 10:12:00 AM

Thanks William for your entry, congrats on placing. Enjoyed some of your interesting words but don't overdo it, it makes it hard to read sometimes.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/24/2021 2:54:00 PM

Thanks, John, your assessment is true and that I make too much of it--best to have not placed, yet then I'd not known--you're too generous my friend, Aloha!