Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Senryu

Selena

My dear Selena

     Fifty-eight years of Heaven

          Best is yet to come

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 4 in Linda-Marie's "Special Sentimental Senryu" Contest - Feb 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:42 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Bob. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 4:53 AM Congratulations Bob on this great dedication to the one who hos your heart... Ready for Baseball my friend!!!

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:04 AM Many Congrats Robert for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:40 PM Beautiful Senryu, dear Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:38 PM You know how to please your lady love, Robert. Special love . Congratulations to you, my friend

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 2:00 PM I just loved this one, Robert. Congratulations.

Wilma Neels February 17, 2011 at 11:41 AM Bob, congratulations on your win with this gem.. Hope your week has been a good one ;-)

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 11:15 AM Congrats Robert on your big win in the contest of Linda---kashinath

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 9:43 AM Hello Robert, A very personal and lovely message here. Congratulations on your win Robert As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:32 AM Congratulations on your very fine 4th Place win, Bob. God bless you both for your fine example of what love truly means! Always, Annalise

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2011 at 8:54 PM time is love's joy, robert!! CONGRATS for the big win.. :) huggs, nette

John Freeman February 16, 2011 at 7:06 PM Congratulations Bob, on your poem's worthy place near the top. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 6:33 PM Bob, congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this fine entry. The first time I saw this, I knew it had a very good chance of winning.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 5:51 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, Bob

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:30 PM Congrats Bob on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your constant support always..

Ralph Taylor February 11, 2011 at 11:24 AM Good luck with this super Senryu entry, Sarge. Enjoyed. Ralphie

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2011 at 11:40 PM Awesome, Robert!

Michael J. Falotico February 5, 2011 at 10:29 AM Very nice my friend, lucky women and lucky man... enjoyed your entry and hearing of your 58 years, only 14 for me so far...Best to you and your lovely wife...Michael

Phyllis Babcock February 5, 2011 at 9:40 AM WOW 58 years and the best is yet to come. THAT IS BEAUTIFUL. God Bless Phyl

Robert Pettit February 5, 2011 at 9:30 AM An excellent senryu and just right for the contest. You've been married four years longer than I've been alive!

Carolyn Devonshire February 5, 2011 at 2:41 AM Awww -- 58 years of bliss and the best is still to come! I'd give it first place, Bob. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn