Selective Memory

If I could remember
Half of what I've forgot
That sure would be something 
I have forgot a lot

The older that I get
The better my life seemed
I can't tell the difference 
From real and what I've dreamed

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Delaney Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 12:19 AM
Congratulation Richard. Nice musings here. SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 6:02 AM
Thanks Suz-D
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 11:53 PM
you are such a clever one. BIG congrats.
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 3:47 PM
I remember reading this before. I knew it had to place. Congratulations Richard on your fabulous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 5:46 PM
Thanks Connie
A   Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations!!! Richard, nice to see you on Nates' winning list. By the looks of his winners, it seems as if he's a real picky person.... xox~ Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Thanks Linda.
Sirak Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well deserved
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Thanks Monterey
D. Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 8:29 PM
thank you
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Hi Nathan sorry I didn't get to finish my response, I was just getting onto a plane so I had to shut of my computer. I appreciate you choosing my poem. The ? Was I went to comment on your work and all the poems were gone. I had hoped to read your work. Take Care Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 8:59 AM
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Widjanarko Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 4:29 AM
I also often to lost a simple memory, or perhaps I wish I could?:p what a day to read your short precious piece today :D, hug, Yanny
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 1:18 PM
Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Yanny, nice to see you back
O'Leary Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 5:18 AM
Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry
Lamoureux Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:30 AM
Thanks Terry
Hicks Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 12:19 AM
I wonder if that's a good thing or bad thing... not being able to tell the difference. This poem is very thought provoking... aren't dreams, in a sense, real to YOU if not in the physical form. Because dreams are apart of you whether they become reality. Luck on the competition!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:29 AM
Kind of like the movie Matrix.
Bono Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:02 PM
aint that the truth.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Hi Colleen, so nice to have your visit.
Hendricks Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Hey, that sounds a lot like me. Why wonder between what is real or dreamed? Opt for the better portion. Good luck in the contest with this gem, Richard. Licia :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:00 PM
Thanks again Licia
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