Jajosh Ongado Poet Rictameter

Seguidillia--1

From a threadbare reverie
Of nights disheveled
An aching solitude grates
Betrayal wrestled--
Howl endures love’s  stain
As rage bears cold quietude
Words cannot explain.


 Contest of nonclaud

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Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 9:47 PM Congratulations on your win it is nicely done, Jajosh. Hugs Eve ~`*

Joanna Daniel September 22, 2017 at 6:58 AM Excellent poetry, Jajosh, congratulations on your win:)

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2017 at 7:25 PM Amazing how you did your seguidillia. Congrats on a pedestal win.

Susan Ashley September 21, 2017 at 5:51 PM Very beautiful write Jajosh. Lovely lines and images. Congratulations on your high number one placement! :)

Constance La France September 21, 2017 at 3:01 PM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write !

Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 2:55 PM Congratulations Jajosh :)

Mike Gentile September 21, 2017 at 2:04 PM Congrats, Jajosh!

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 1:24 PM tearing me to bits as you expressed 'not a sound from the pavement' in an inimitable way...cheers J for a high slot and thanks for being part of this contest..huggs

Vijay Pandit September 13, 2017 at 1:31 PM WOW! Well written, lovely poem, Jajosh--good luck for a win!