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Seguidilla: Mystery Dance

Soundless shadows on pavement:
What does the night bring?
Is love now just a mirage?
Why does my soul sing?
Reflections entrance,
allure in the dimmest light:
a mystery dance.

Lamplight reflects in puddles,
mirrors of my soul.
Opaque shadows on pavement,
now darkness the goal.
Reflections abstruse
underneath a glowing light,
my heart thus confused.

She loves me, she loves me not,
I now ask again.
The night provides no answers,
is my silent friend.
Where are my flowers
for the plucking to begin,
clarity's bowers?


4th Place
Seguidilla Contest
Sponsor:  Nette Onclaud
9/13/17
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Roper Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your win :) Dale, a very beautiful verse.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 12:13 AM
Congratulations, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Thanks you so much!
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:33 PM
DAle, I see Nette did not mind after all about how many stanzas and I am glad to see you put them back. Congrats to you.
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Congrats Dale!
Cozart Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Thanks, Vijay.
La France Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Dale, congratulations on your win, I liked all 3 !!
Sands Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations Dale :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 2:40 PM
this should have placed higher, but on my contest's entry page, i only got the first verse,,???...i hail you for the quality of this work and the effort you put into this laudable poem, dale...my warm congrats and thanks for joining; deeply appreciated..huggs
Cozart Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Thanks so much, Nette, but because I was concerned you only wanted one stanza I deleted the other two. I have now replaced them.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Her contest inspired a very beautiful poem in you! Soupmail.
Warrior Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Very nicely done my friend...a winner in my court Dale...god bless...^WW^
Cozart Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Thanks, WW.
Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Wow! This one is mindblowing and a sure winner, Dale:)
Cozart Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Krampe Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:24 PM
You make the seguidilla look elegant and effortless. Good luck in the contest.
Cozart Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:32 PM
Thanks so much, Agnes.
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 7:24 PM
I have tough time with 7 lines, you managed 21--well written--a winning poem!
Cozart Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay.
Sands Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Well written with expression. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest! :)
Cozart Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thanks, Heidi.
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