Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

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Seguidilla - 1

Alone on cobblestone streets
Silence engulfs me
A lonely strike at midnight
Reflections I see
Puddles with streetlights
Pulling my heart underneath
Drowned by shades of white

Heidi Sands

9/13/17

*Placed 1st place in the Seguidilla Contest Sponsored by:  Nette Oncloud

*Checked by syllable counter

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Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 9:46 PM Congratulations on your win it is nicely done, Heidi. Hugs Eve ~`* Heidi Sands September 24, 2017 at 2:56 AM Thank you Eve :)

Roy Pett September 23, 2017 at 6:30 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Heidi, so pleased. :))) Heidi Sands September 23, 2017 at 6:32 PM Thank you so much Roy :)

Joanna Daniel September 22, 2017 at 6:59 AM Told you this would win, and I'm really glad it did, Heidi, congratulations:) Heidi Sands September 22, 2017 at 7:11 AM You were right Jo ! Thank you for your comments :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 22, 2017 at 12:09 AM Congratulations on your big win, Heidi. Heidi Sands September 22, 2017 at 7:10 AM Thank you Subimal! :)

Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 4:42 PM Lovely to see your # 1 win--Congrats Heidi! Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 4:50 PM Hi. I can't thank you enough for all your consistent , positive support. It means a lot to me :)

Joseph May September 21, 2017 at 4:32 PM Congrats on a great win Heidi Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 4:32 PM Thank you Joseph! :)

Frederic Parker September 21, 2017 at 4:31 PM congratulations Hedi for your win in nette's contest...well done Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 4:32 PM Thank you Frederic :)

Constance La France September 21, 2017 at 3:01 PM Heidi, congratulations on your awesome win in the contest, great poem ! Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 3:27 PM Thank you for your visit and kind feedback! :)

Gary Smith September 21, 2017 at 2:25 PM Excellent poetry Heidi, congrats :) Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thank you Gary ! :)

Mike Gentile September 21, 2017 at 2:03 PM Wow, Congratulations, Heidi XXXOOO Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thank you Mike! :) Happy Thursday! :)

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 1:12 PM such a deep poem so beautifully and sommothly written , heidi.. sweet congrats on your top award and thanks for gracing this challenge..huggs Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 2:49 PM Hi Nette! Thank you so much. I am happy I could participate in your contest! I appreciate the placement win :)

John Michaels September 15, 2017 at 1:13 PM Nicely-written, Heidi. A definite sense of sorrow comes through. Good luck in the contest. Regards, John. Heidi Sands September 15, 2017 at 2:04 PM Thanks ...John. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. September 15, 2017 at 11:47 AM Mighty fine poem and pic, Heidi. Enlighten me, please. What is a Siguidilla? Excellent poem. Love and smiles always. Heidi Sands September 15, 2017 at 2:03 PM Hi Freddie. Funny...I was wondering the same. I just wrote it how the contest said to and with the photo the contest posted for inspiration . Thank you!

Joseph May September 15, 2017 at 10:12 AM Very nicely penned Heidi Heidi Sands September 15, 2017 at 10:13 AM Thank you Joseph! :)

Joanna Daniel September 14, 2017 at 8:47 AM Wow! I love this one, Heidi, if I were the judge, I would rate this one as the first:) Heidi Sands September 14, 2017 at 9:25 AM Thank you so much Jo Daniel. That is kind to say. I am happy you like it :)

Gary Smith September 14, 2017 at 7:21 AM Lovely moody poem Heidi, good luck :) Heidi Sands September 14, 2017 at 7:27 AM Thank you Gary :)

John Lawless September 13, 2017 at 9:26 PM Hey...Heidi, sounds like you've been to Copley Square. Just posted my entry and then read this one....let's just hope Nette is in the mood for love....good luck in the contest Heidi Sands September 14, 2017 at 7:27 AM Hi John. Thank you for your comment. I will read your entry and I wish you luck in the contest too :)

Vijay Pandit September 13, 2017 at 7:15 PM You did a good job Heidi with this poem--lovely interpretation of the picture--good luck to win! Heidi Sands September 13, 2017 at 7:20 PM Thank you Vijay. Your feedback is always appreciated :) You are kind.

Sunlite Wanter September 13, 2017 at 6:27 PM Striking picture to fit a lovely moody poem! Heidi Sands September 13, 2017 at 6:39 PM Thank you Sunlite. The photo was at the contest, for inspiration to write the poem.

Russell Sivey September 13, 2017 at 6:24 PM Oh, I love this! This is a tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and heartwarming poem here this evening! You have amazed me yet again by your incredible skill Heidi, Great Work!! Heidi Sands September 13, 2017 at 6:38 PM Thank you Russell! I always appreciate your uplifting, kind comments :)